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Her gaze took my breath With beauty that melts the heart And kindness within Thankfulness washed over me And I was lost in her eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/3/2021 6:03:00 PM
I like the unique take on 'thanksgiving' - sweet and romantic, hope it's a winner for you~
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Andy Chunn
Date: 11/6/2021 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Michelle....most appreciated.
Date: 10/28/2021 1:27:00 AM
Lovely one, Andy:) well penned:)
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Date: 10/26/2021 6:32:00 PM
Nicely structured, adaptable to many situations. Thank you for sharing :)
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Andy Chunn
Date: 11/6/2021 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Edward. Your Thanksgiving tanka was also very nice. "Thankful for all we cherish".....that says it all.
Date: 10/26/2021 6:25:00 PM
Beautiful and beautifully written.
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