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loosing you

My biggest fear that i face is loosing you
You forgetting me when you leave 
You away, happily enjoying life ,
My struggle and cries ,
Something you will fail to see 
I know you have a life to live and I 
understand your dreams,
All i want is the best for you and that your 
smile shines even brighter than it 
currently beams 
Our journey has never been easy and I 
pray that we continue to walk longer,
For my emotions have only deepened with 
this love that grows stronger

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:56:00 AM
    Nice write Chanelle! Love and fear have the tendency to stick together but they work well with the right balance. Lovely poem this!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:32:00 PM
    Beautiful words of expression here!! enjoyed dearly...regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 9:31:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Chanelle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:12:00 PM
    So It is with loving someone...always that hope for the "forever after". Such a passionate verse, your voice is strong. (best in line 8 probably)...Peace and Love! Cynthia