Looking To the Heavens

Just a victim of the system, And left Star incensed Effervescent Moon of crescent Comets crashing, craters hence Planets positions, Sun's collision Constellations form a Sign And give me such a clearer vision- A heightened sense of Mind

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/26/2013 8:16:00 AM

Chan This is unique and gets the reader thinking about the message you are trying to capture in these words. But don't make me think too much. My mind will shut down. LOL Thanks for the sweet and caring comment on my Staying And Repaying poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/27/2013 6:21:00 AM

lol thanks for the review, Sweet Pea <3

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/12/2013 12:37:00 PM

Just beautiful! This poem gives the reader much to ponder. Amazing flow to your words, once again! Nicely done!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 4:16:00 PM

Again, a mere "thank you" is insufficient to articulate my appreciation of your review. It warms my heart :)