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I would rather lie still and accept eventual death than try to squirm my way out of a hammock while someone is watching me

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Date: 8/17/2015 4:54:00 AM
Self respect in the superlative degree! I would rather you stay alive my friend, Bill, and for that I will never watch you when you will be squirming your way out of a hammock! Ha-ha! Very good shape though!
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Date: 8/16/2015 6:33:00 PM
Thats because you are a guy. Watching a pretty woman squirm out of a hammock would not be a bad thing methinks. lol
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Date: 8/16/2015 6:07:00 PM
Soul searching write Bill..Well done!
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