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Liquid Heaven

Liquid Heaven A feast for my womanly inner beast! I tease, I please, you have me on my knees I wring my hands, you oint my head With your fingers locked in my hair of red You -I call Master! Begging for forgiveness, in a position of love My words are bashing with one stuttering sound Moaning & Moaning, As you make my head spin like a merry-go-round Craving for you to unleash a liquid heaven sound My body speaks and mumbles a language meant for you A touch of intimacy, that lathers up like liquid glue Sticky but, yet so compelling My tongue slips silent beloved words of joy into the air You play the master of this dark solid room This dungeon's all I consume You engage me, to provoke you with everything I got Yelling, please master don't ever stop! At this moment, I yearn for excitement To feel the arousing sensation of your presence That melts me and chill me with a flow that does not kill I'm your thinker Your muse and poet You are my composer creating liquid tunes Come here and expresses the hardness of your boldness I confess to you my love You are all I'm dreaming of You drive your hands all over Reaching every steamy spot Encourage me to stimulate your mental needs You are the master withholding a liquid element In me, you release fluids that hit like a silent tide A desire that comes with a full force of the fire inside I crave for the taste of your lips Your hands on my hips Your fingers with a tight sensual grip I dedicate my heart and my lust To get lost within every push of your trust Like a treasure deep underneath the sand I'm addicted to the feelings of your command Your hazel eyes are the sunrise You bring out the obsession, And my sweet tooth temptation Like the moon above a misty night Seducing me in every way in a poetic write YOU, MY LOVE!!! Your liquid heaven is the beginning- -Of my delicious delight! by: PD **A sweet Dedication To My Babe**

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Date: 9/22/2019 2:45:00 PM
Loved it. My body speaks and mumbles a language meant for you". Beautiful.
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Date: 3/20/2016 5:13:00 PM
I hope that was s memory of yours And not just a fantasy.
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:08:00 AM
8D
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Date: 12/27/2014 10:35:00 AM
damn, I need a cold shower! very good!!
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Date: 8/19/2014 7:05:00 PM
This was a Sexy poem P.D, I enjoyed the poetic balance and raw emotions in it. Awesome girl, thanks for sharing. Take care my friend, Jess :) xoxo
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Date: 2/22/2014 3:00:00 PM
I love how you engage the writer as well as the pulsing body. A true masterpiece of lust and lost refrain PD. " AS YOU MAKE MY HEAD SWIRL LIKE A MERRY GO ROUND..." Awesome! J.A.B.
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Date: 6/22/2013 10:24:00 PM
You really get into the grit of your subject and then hammer it out until you've squeezed every drop of emotion possible. WOW WOW WOW. :)
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Date: 4/25/2013 1:29:00 PM
wow- the sexiest poem I've ever read. I will have to fav this poem after I cooloff \ Finn
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Date: 3/12/2013 4:17:00 PM
Your a sexy woman. Obviously, know how to please a man. Nathan is a lucky man......................your friend rick
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Date: 1/21/2013 9:49:00 PM
Wow!... Jack
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Ron Bergundy
Date: 1/31/2013 2:26:00 PM
omg si robertson!!!!!!!!!!1
Date: 11/14/2012 7:42:00 PM
glad to see you in the top 100 PD
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Date: 6/5/2012 4:24:00 PM
Very good, reminds me of times gone by, if you get my drift.
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Ron Bergundy
Date: 1/31/2013 2:27:00 PM
omg i do shine
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Moon Shine
Date: 1/31/2013 2:26:00 PM
I get your drift ;) wanna have a few times go by with me
Date: 4/9/2012 10:46:00 PM
what a big bang effect.I ABSOLUTELY enjoyed this.
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Moon Shine
Date: 1/31/2013 2:27:00 PM
me and your mom are had a big bang affec
Date: 4/3/2012 6:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and I think this poem is one of your best P.D. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2012 6:11:00 PM
such good work you do.Hope you are doing well.
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:07:00 PM
Smile ˜ I have arrived at the realization of one truth, and one truth alone my dear * I need Your lovin * My love, Forever, John!:) ?
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Date: 5/6/2012 12:11:00 PM
...."Yeap, 'That's It.'" *
Date: 1/29/2012 9:52:00 AM
soupmail!
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Date: 1/25/2012 7:05:00 PM
Ummmmmmmmmmmmm AWSOME lol that was something else PD you've really done it this time! 1200 views lmao no wonder
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Date: 1/25/2012 4:35:00 PM
I haven't to poetrysoup for some time. Your work is improving, and tells of your vast imagination! Mine coming together slowly, and with Thirst For More. Thx for encouragement. Jan
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Date: 1/22/2012 12:46:00 PM
Awesome write...a million more good comments wished upon you, I just love your work.
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Date: 1/17/2012 9:32:00 AM
Your use of words are amazing........I love this.
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:43:00 PM
Very descriptive write. No wonder you have so many reviews of this entry. I'm impressed.
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:43:00 PM
just stopping by to say HEY!! Enjoyed your blogs today. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:24:00 PM
Your words are getting STEAMY sister! I diGG it! You are a caring person. I see you looking out for everyone! The love bounces back! Nice work here PD ...Domo ,.......~JoeY
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