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There were pink blossoms on the trees that fateful day. The teasing breeze whispered of love as their eyes met; they lingered there till the sun set. The days went by since that first kiss; their dancing hearts were wrapped in bliss. The smell of lilacs filled the air. They had their dreams and love to share. But cruel fate took him away, no mercy shown, tragic the day when she was left in tears, in pain; she longed for him, but all in vain. Her aching heart, a pitch black room wherein no more do flowers bloom. She lost the will to bathe in hues, the songs of life have turned to blues. ----------------------------------------------- [Smell of lilacs, pitch black room, dancing] 29th December, 2015 Contest: Combination of Three Words Sponsor: Laura Loo Placed 2nd

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Date: 3/6/2016 1:16:00 AM
Very Nice Paul... congratulations
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:21:00 AM
Pleased that you like it, Pashang; thank you. All the best. // paul
Date: 3/4/2016 8:35:00 PM
This is one of the finest piece of art and we call it poetry...my heart felt so much for this one, Paul...! I love your poems and I am waiting for a new post ....great write by a great poet...faving it now..!!!!
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Red! You are kind and generous:) I am so glad that this poem 'spoke' to you, and the fav is also much appreciated. Wishing you a lovely weekend ~ regards // paul
Date: 2/18/2016 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful and yet sad. Congratulation on the very high-marked win! I personally enjoyed the "teasing breeze" and "bathe in hues", as the most immersive of your expressions.
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Date: 2/18/2016 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, Timothy. The high ranking surpassed my expectations; I was more concerned with fitting in the 3 proposed phrases than anything else. // paul
Date: 1/12/2016 11:54:00 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Sara; that is why I'm in favour of contests, because they are often a source of inspiration. ~ All the best.....paul
Date: 1/12/2016 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations Paul for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, Hansteven. Pleased to have made your acquaintance:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 1/10/2016 11:03:00 PM
Hello, Paul, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/11/2016 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Linda:) Hope you are keeping well and active. ~ Regards *~* paul
Date: 1/8/2016 5:21:00 PM
G'day Paul... full of beauty, emotion, and sadness. Your poem is a definite winner - Lindsay
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Date: 1/11/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay. Your feedback is very encouraging. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 1/8/2016 1:00:00 AM
oh! very sad for her.......life s unfair sometimes.
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Date: 1/9/2016 10:11:00 AM
Life is often very unfair, LL; that is why we have to make the most of what we have while the going's good. Regards // paul
Date: 1/4/2016 3:39:00 PM
Paul, your words express the emotional and heartfelt pain so well in this lovely poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:45:00 PM
Thank you for the congrats and the lovely feedback, Sandra. Your winning entry proved to be very much to my liking, and I can still picture that special birthday cake with the surprise message! ~ // paul
Date: 1/4/2016 2:33:00 PM
This is a WOW and I see it won - no wonder. I love it ... CayCay
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:18:00 PM
A wow is very meaningful, CayCay:) Thank you for reading and liking! ~~ paul
Date: 1/4/2016 10:21:00 AM
PAUL, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Date: 1/4/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Skat. Pleased to see that you changed your mind:) Hugs // paul
Date: 1/4/2016 12:23:00 AM
Hi Paul, just wandering around the site reading catchy titles. Nice one, I love the writes that draw me in right away.
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Date: 1/4/2016 11:38:00 AM
You are kind, Jeannie (pronounced like the magic lamp one?:); thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Pleased to have made your acquaintance. ~ All the best for the new year. ~ paul
Date: 1/3/2016 12:14:00 PM
A sad end!could feel every emotion! Congrats on your win Paul!
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Date: 1/3/2016 2:00:00 PM
It had to be sad, Balveen, with the phrase 'a pitch black room' being among the requisites! Thank you for the lovely feedback and congrats. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 1/3/2016 10:37:00 AM
Paul..this moved me. You have such a special way of words..You are very talented and I am grateful to have met you here :)-luloo
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:57:00 PM
You are kind and generous, Laura:) Thank you! ...I am so pleased to be on your winners' list. Enjoyed this challenging contest! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 12/31/2015 2:57:00 AM
Paul, I like the way your 4 short stanzas gave us a gyst of the story.. not only are the flowers colorful and perfumed but also the shift of shades to the lovers life... =`) I blow you a prayers of Blessed Happy New Year to You and me!!! Hugs!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 12/31/2015 3:42:00 AM
Thank you Olive_eloi....you read it well:) colours play a main part in this sad drama! ~ Thank you for the prayers, and may I wish you and those close to your heart the very best for a happy and blessed new year. ~ Hugsss ~*~ paul
Date: 12/30/2015 7:22:00 PM
Hi Paul. As always, I am struck by the powerful imagery and deep emotions your words evoke. Wishing you the best in the contest and a great year to you and yours. PS. Here today just to read and greet. PS. Thanks for everything. hugs!
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Date: 12/31/2015 3:00:00 AM
Good morning Kim:) It is lovely to see you back, even if just reading and commenting for a start! Thank you for stopping by with lovely comments and wishes. Let us show the new year that strength of character and positivity can place high on our agenda:) All the best & hugs ~ paul
Date: 12/30/2015 5:52:00 PM
Beautiful write, Paul, a winner in my eyes!!! Hugs sweet friend and have a very safe and Happy New Year's
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Date: 12/31/2015 3:03:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Eve, especially for your kindness and continuous support throughout the year, and for sharing your poetic emotions with us! May the new year bring you happiness, serenity and good health. ~ Hugs // paul
Date: 12/30/2015 12:25:00 PM
You always paint a beautiful picture Paul... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:02:00 PM
You too are always good to me, Linda! Thank you for your visits and support:) Wishing you and those close to your heart all the best for the new year. Take care. hugs ~ paul
Date: 12/30/2015 11:38:00 AM
ohh, the sullen imagery makes this piece so endearing, paul.. another gem!.. hugggs
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Date: 12/30/2015 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Nette..you are so kind! In return, I ought to gather my gems and make them into a lovely necklace for you!:) Hugsss // paul
Date: 12/30/2015 8:10:00 AM
Tragic and romantic! Beautifully done! A seven dear Paul! Just to wish you and your family: Happy New Year! May the Good Lord, grant you health, love, happiness And the realization of each of your dreams!
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Date: 12/30/2015 3:51:00 PM
I appreciate your complimentary remarks, my friend! Thank you for all your support! May the new year be a peaceful and happy one for you and all those close to you! // paul
Date: 12/29/2015 4:19:00 PM
Sad......but beautiful. Poetry that works it's spell. Please check out my latest poem. Also, please read Heather's latest blog about the duet contest. Hugs
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Date: 12/30/2015 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Eileen! That poem has gone in my favs and into my personal file; it means a lot to me:) Have read Heather's blog; will enter the contest as well; better do it now before I forget!! Hugs // paul
Date: 12/29/2015 4:08:00 PM
Reads like a winner.. enjoyed reading your contest entry..Sometimes when a mate dies the other person no longer has a will to live..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2015 2:42:00 PM
So glad that you enjoyed it, Sara! Thank you for the feedback. Always a pleasure to have you visiting. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 12/29/2015 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful but so sad Paul and I love the clever title - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2015 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Jan:) I thought that pink, lilac and blue would go well together! Sheila always harps on the need to match colours when choosing what to wear:) Hugs // paul

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