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Lightning

Lightning L ighning flashed and lit the sky I ndeed t'was a storm nearby G usts of wind and sounds of thunder H igh in the clouds and way down under T rees and houses shaking with fear N ot a person had a minute to spear I t was never so scary at night N ever ever was the sky so bright G rannies and children all cuddled up tight.

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Date: 12/17/2008 4:22:00 PM
Nice job! Is line 6 "not a minute to spare?
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Date: 12/12/2008 9:46:00 AM
Ezcellent Acrostic that describes your theme so vividly! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/11/2008 10:27:00 PM
This is such a well written poem. Great acrostic and perfect rhyme, too. Great write! Glad you liked my poems. Thank you for your comments. Have a wonderful holiday. Love Robin
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Date: 12/11/2008 4:12:00 PM
nice job...kind makes me want it to storm.....anna
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