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Lifes Simplicity Maintained

You were born in a specialist clinic I was born at the front door of my house we both came into this world and survived. You’ve been eating foreign cuisines and expensive delicacies I’ve been taking porridge and traditional soups we both have grown and are a significant part of the society. You go to school in Jeeps and exotic vehicles I use public transport and finish it up with a walk we both went to learning institutions and acquired knowledge. You roll with the high and mighty and get a super model married I’m surrounded by the middle class and marries one never will be in Wikipedia we both are active in the food chain and wonderfully living our lives. You become a CEO or rather own a firm I get employed by you to run your empire we both sure need each other to function and drive. Gold and Diamonds will decorate the casket of your funeral mine may not even be worthy of a coffin, just a plain box we’ll nevertheless be dead and our chapter closed without preference. It is only a pathology when the eye gets larger than its socket, comparison cuts the muscles of esteem and gives greed a new suit, making simplicity a very complex attribute to attain and a life full of complexities a better friend to existence. Life is simple, we just make it complicated. A civil servant wants to live at par with a tycoon allowing his throat tie down the strength of his hands. Every destination has different roads, be it the highway or a rocky path. Take the one within your speed limit, the timing may show some reaching before or better than others but the most important thing is, the destination reached as achievement is decorated while life stay simple.

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Date: 11/14/2022 11:57:00 PM
You have expressed your ideas in a beautiful manner...a great write indeed!
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Date: 6/24/2020 10:41:00 PM
There is nothing simplistic about the way you write, beautifully sophisticated and in its entirety it never strays from its subject. I absolutely love this and it's meaning. Favorite. Be safe
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Sheri Evans... Your comments give a lot of joy. I truly appreciate this.
Date: 1/11/2020 12:23:00 AM
So nicely written, Funom. Liked the theme and its flow. God bless you.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Pratap Roy
Date: 1/5/2016 9:58:00 PM
Excellent poem Funom, just want to ask what kind of literary devices, figures of speech did you use on this poem
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Kiko, its mostly similes, personification and metaphors
Date: 11/21/2015 3:47:00 AM
"... Every destination has different roads, be it the highway or a rocky path. Take the one within your speed limit, ..." This is the wisdom we often miss in the rat race that consumes us. Love the lines, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Agona
Date: 11/7/2015 10:48:00 PM
Money is the one thing that really divides people, but underneath that we are all equal human beings with nothing to separate each one... This poem is quite moving when spoken from a wise heart like yours. Very well written, Funom!
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Kelly
Date: 11/5/2015 8:50:00 AM
Yes, a simple life and satisfaction with it is the key to our continued survival as a species and to the well being of our planet shareholders. You have touched my soul--and that is all we can really do.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Duke Beaufort
Date: 11/4/2015 7:11:00 AM
Love the contrast. Love the ending as well. Good work
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:37:00 AM
Thank you so much John Pen
Date: 11/3/2015 11:43:00 AM
Lovely, dear Funom. You speak with such wisdom. Yes, we cannot change some aspects of our lives, but we can live our lives within our means and to the best of our abilities. Lovely....I can see why this became POTD, dear. :) Congrats.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/23/2015 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Eileen
Date: 11/1/2015 3:00:00 PM
Funom, please accept my belated congratulations to you for your wonderful poem chosen as Poem of the Day! Much to think about and great wisdom in your words. Best regards, Sandra
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/2/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra Haight
Date: 11/1/2015 1:21:00 PM
- A truly wonderful poem, Funom - Congratulation on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/2/2015 4:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise
Date: 11/1/2015 12:13:00 PM
The complexities of different life styles are well stated in this wonderful poem. Excellent poem. love phyl
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/25/2020 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/31/2015 6:31:00 PM
Well done, Funom!! This is an analytical approach to life...clearly defined and bears solid signs of wisdom. Congrats on POTD. // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 9:04:00 AM
Thank you very much.....Paul Callus
Date: 10/31/2015 1:37:00 PM
Hello Funom!! Congratulations on POTD!! Very Well-Done!! This is really a great poem indeed. Life certainly has its twists and turns for sure. Keep up all of you great writing my friend!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Gary Bateman
Date: 10/31/2015 12:46:00 PM
Beautifully penned on how you perceive life in its many complexities. Congrats on making poem of the day, Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Theresa M
Date: 10/31/2015 10:47:00 AM
...gives greed a new suit. Lines like that are something to behold. What fabulous poetry.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Scott
Date: 10/31/2015 9:08:00 AM
Hi Funum: If you are fortunate to age healthy you can seek simplicity. Unless you win the lotto. I enjoyed your poem and its philosophy.
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/31/2015 9:00:00 AM
This is an extremely awesome poem from you my dear friend Funom. A great reminder to us of what really life is and how we really have to live on it. It's my great pleasure to read it tonight. Kudos to you and warm Congrats as deserving poem of the day! God bless! Thank you so much as well for taking you time to read one of my poems and for your very encouraging words. Hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Leonaora
Date: 10/31/2015 8:54:00 AM
I love your comparison in life, congratulations on Poem of the Day!!!! Hugs Eve
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Eve Roper
Date: 10/31/2015 8:44:00 AM
Funom, Congratulation for the selection as poem of the day. It is a great poem with high realization in so simple approach Wish you to reach your destination following right path in journey of life Anisha Dutta
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Date: 11/1/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/31/2015 7:39:00 AM
really nice. expressing in simple words!!!!!!!!!!!
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thank you very much..... K.S Lakshmi
Date: 10/31/2015 7:37:00 AM
very descriptive!!!! strong powerful lines!!kudos!~Olive Eloisa
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Olive
Date: 10/31/2015 7:15:00 AM
Funom, this piece is a great selection for the poem of the day! Congrats:-)Alexis
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Alexis Y
Date: 10/31/2015 7:09:00 AM
a simple poem with a profound message :) awesome :)) Congrats :D
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:49:00 AM
Thank you very much..... My friend
Date: 10/31/2015 6:30:00 AM
A very worthy choice for POTD Funom - its what we do with our life that is important - we may take different paths but the final desitnation will be the same for us all:-) hugs Jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/1/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thank you very much..... Jan Allison
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