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Life's Dance

Take my hand in yours To walk the sands of time Let's dance to the tunes of life And waltz away our cares. We will two and fro To the beat of the dropping sand Together we will serenade Tell the time for us has run out. 7/3/15

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Funom Makama

Date: 10/13/2015 8:48:00 AM

longest time friend. You've just exhibited to the highest quality exactly what I have missed in here for months. Your lines are so exciting and your words are each having that second hand of drawing me back to them again and again and again irrespective of how many times I have gone through them. Its nice to be home and you are part of the reason I have this refreshing feeling. A definite 7. Cheers!

Daver Austin

Date: 7/30/2015 6:09:00 PM

Music and the hour glass - two great metaphors for the life dance. Enjoyed. Love, daver

Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 6:46:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 2:11:00 PM

So nice this is and smooth as a waltz , dearie. how are you today? I am on my last day in Kentucky and glad I found you on here today.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/3/2015 11:35:00 AM

- I wish it were possible ..... "dance to the tunes of life .... And waltz away our cares" - A lovely poem, dear Phyllis - (7) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)