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Life Be Good

Me slob clob be a dirty grey me school an open alleyway no sissy pens; we wield 'em guns me canna count but me's no dunce Clompers bare; me sneakers hocked jiggle barefoot roll and rock breathe in deep me dead-rat whiff and suck me wacky backy spliff Workavoidic be me graft pleasure be a tankard draught a willing gape to lard me wand in Pete or Rex or busty blonde Me rolled the slapper in the buff caught the clap; she's up the duff me downs no drink not alcoholic comfy in me world shambolic *******************************

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 11:03:00 PM

Delysia, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Len Gasun

Date: 6/28/2015 10:07:00 AM

Just dropping by to enjoy this very beautiful and delightful poem my dear friend, delysia. Where are you and how are you my very dear friend? Hope you're doing well. Just sending Hi and warm hugs from me. Miss you! love lots, Leonora

Terrell Martin

Date: 11/9/2014 8:53:00 AM

Tis classic you - ye ravin wench. Wish we could meet upon they bench:) Thanks again for the update email and I FINALLY posted something new...a bit philosophical, as usual for a slob like me! Cheers m'dear, Terry

Gail Debole

Date: 3/14/2014 10:59:00 AM

You are definitely a great talent!

Funom Makama

Date: 2/28/2014 11:33:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

Michael Wegman

Date: 2/26/2014 10:04:00 PM

FANTASTIC, Delysia! Read it twice for dramatic effect...or is that affect? lol Thanks, and PLEASE keep'em coming!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/19/2014 11:33:00 PM

A different kind of poem . Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/18/2014 9:30:00 AM

Good morning Licia, you are missed.

Ephraim Crud

Date: 12/14/2013 9:44:00 AM

a seven rating's not enough for this intoxicatin' write! Oo are sooooo good, me lovely Squiff, soooo bloody good! whoop-whoop, and all me loves, xxx eph

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/6/2013 1:13:00 PM

How many a tankard draught it be fer pen to write such words fer ye, love it Lysia,blessings, Carl

Mark Peterson

Date: 12/5/2013 7:15:00 PM

This is just so clever. Sometimes the maladroit alley rat is more cogent than us all.

Richard D Seal

Date: 12/5/2013 3:26:00 PM

Sis, I had no idea you knew me so well hahaha. Brilliant writing, right up my alley lol. Proud of yer. Take care, Richard

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2013 4:03:00 AM

raring to read your new one, licia... hello and huggs

Donna Jones

Date: 12/2/2013 6:09:00 PM

I thought only rednecks said wacky backy:-) :-) And I is one! So loved this...:-)

Joseph Matose

Date: 12/2/2013 1:18:00 PM

Another unique style of your own. This kind of creativity clobbers me for sure. You've made my day, Shamwari! JM

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/2/2013 9:03:00 AM

You are truly one of a kind. You know how to make me laugh!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/1/2013 6:00:00 AM

Excellent. Both Rhyme and rhythm sounds great. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2013 11:23:00 AM

hearty work that delights, licia... i feel your brand of gaiety... greeat stuff written so differently!...huggs

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/30/2013 8:51:00 AM

Methinks you are from another planet sent down to entertain and thrill us with your unique poetic style!!! You leave me speechless... well not exactly speechless but... er... great poem in your inimitable style! Love and huggeroonies xox

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2013 8:45:00 AM

- Really good poem !!! - ..... our choices .... right or wrong ... Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/30/2013 6:21:00 AM

A desplay of incomparable poetic abilty! A marvel of rhyme and rythm! Great work! 7!

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/30/2013 5:29:00 AM

delysia, great rhymer indeed.i really want to improve but my leisure is limited and great challenges is career.I take your words seriously to mend my sillybulls and meter.I am improving a lot. I'll stick to rhyming poems for some time.Thank you.(: ) Jenish.