Life

Life is a lock Questing for my key Will I get the right one? Life's a river Many twists and turns Where are my boat and fin? Life is rainbow Sky full of colors When will I perceive them? Life is a game Learning tricks to play Will I win in the game? Life is magic My sticks are missing Where is my dear angel?

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/8/2020 8:41:00 PM

A lustrous strand of Questionku, Supraja, as thought-provoking as they are beautiful. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan

Carol Mitra

Date: 12/7/2020 4:59:00 AM

Life is all of the above and more...Congrats on your win Supraja :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/15/2016 12:11:00 PM

If life is a game, it cheats! Life is a question, waiting to be answered. Love the write, Supraja.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/20/2016 7:23:00 PM

Wonderful poem. Thanks for posting..................A.M.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/18/2016 6:36:00 AM

Hello Supraja!! Your "Life" Questionku is superbly rendered. All of them are quite relevant, with special emphasis on the last one. Excellent Work!! A BIG SEVEN!! Cheer and Best, Gary

Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/18/2016 10:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Gary for your nice comment... SO,glad you liked it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2016 6:57:00 PM

the last line was so sweet. Wouldn't it be nice to meet our dear angel? (hopefully we have one)

Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/17/2016 10:35:00 PM

True...It will be really nice to meet our angel Andrea... Thank you so much for your time...

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 11/17/2016 4:01:00 PM

life is a game, life is magic.. nice piece Supraja .

Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/17/2016 10:34:00 PM

Thank you so much ...Glad you liked it...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2016 12:26:00 PM

- Like pearls on a string .... lovely written Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/17/2016 10:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words...Glad you liked it...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/16/2016 12:11:00 PM

such a thought provoking reflection of life... wonderfully penned, supraja... huggs

Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/17/2016 2:49:00 AM

Thanks a lot nette..So glad you liked it...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/16/2016 8:01:00 AM

Life is an enigma that we desperately try to resolve, will we have the time? Life is to live it in the best ways of our understanding! A impressive strings of Questionku dear Supraja! Much enjoyed!

Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/17/2016 2:49:00 AM

Fantastic comment..Loved it... Thank you so much for your valuable comment...

Eve Roper

Date: 11/15/2016 9:23:00 AM

The imagery of you being a lock is fascinating :-) good imagery and questions. Hugs eve

Supraja Kannan
Date: 11/15/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your time...Glad you liked it...