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Very deep inside is a nice river A lovely pride and a love for ever When intense dark descends all lamps go out In the silence fireflies are in look out And not far from it there’s the scorching heat Of the desert where sand and sun hold feast When the heat is too much I have to search Some cool time under the shade of a birch I go to shore where wind plays viola To take cola in a green gondola Lo, above the very beautiful sight Tipsy a slight under dreamy starlight The river and the desert control life Shade of peace and sweltering sun of strife __________________________________________ 22/8/16 : Couplet time poetry contest

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Date: 8/24/2016 11:05:00 AM
This is nice and absolutely beautiful. I love every it of this piece of yours and I am happy reading from the creativity of your wonderful mind after a long period of time.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/24/2016 11:08:00 AM
Yes, am seeing your face after quite some time. I did not get time to visit your page too. Sorry. Thank you for reading and liking my poem ...
Date: 8/23/2016 5:44:00 AM
The dancing of opposites dazzling my friend, Probir! Beautiful couplet!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/23/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/22/2016 3:24:00 PM
quilled with depth and understanding of life/ spirit, probir... wonderful!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/22/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/22/2016 12:40:00 PM
Lovely lines on the shades of life Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/22/2016 8:31:00 PM
Thank you

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