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I live to die then, I die to live again

For David Williams' "Chiasmus Contest"
6th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 6/4/2012 4:30:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Great Job!

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 3:57:00 PM
    glad i've seen this Carol. harry

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 9:05:00 AM
    oh I lIKe THIS THANX for your comment!

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 12:27:00 AM
    Enigmatic monoku Carol. Like plants they die then live again when someone plants and nurtures their seeds. Love Dalila

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 4:18:00 AM
    And they all said AMEN!

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:32:00 AM
    It is short yet extremely thought provoking, i especially like the first line. hahahahahahahahaha

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Yes, my friend. Its the life we die and live with expectation. Lovely done, you are always genius. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 11:53:00 AM
    yes..yes... Life... i want to live and live again... already read this one..but, oh well... twice would never hurt...always...pd

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 6:51:00 AM
    Congrats on your win! Good job! JP

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 9:46:00 AM
    Here is a winner! Congrats, Carol. A very deep poem in a line :)

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 9:17:00 PM
    Congrats on your win! what a profound monoko! love it

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 7:05:00 PM
    Carol,, Congratulations with your wonderful win.. in David's contest..xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 4:03:00 PM
    Very nice Carol! Doing good. No internet so don't get to visit often. Thanks for all your support and for reading my material. Love always!

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Then the mind becomes an observer of human life, instead of confining to any one belief. Then thinking and words become a legendary symbol. So beautiful and meaningful are these words my friend. It is always a joy to read and to think over on such wonderful expressions. Thank you for your precious comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes always….Ravindra .....Carol Brown

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 12:26:00 PM
    The beauty of these lines lies in the universal thinking of its beautiful writer 'Carol Brown'. These universal feelings come, when you start looking things from a lofty height. Standing on such a height makes your vision more broad and universal. Then you do not think and see things on the basis of caste, creed and religion, but you watch things in their true prospective, irrespective of time, place, nation and religion. continue on next....j46

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 12:00:00 PM
    What is our life? Just 100 miles Which will we pass And call it life We have just time To solve all things When one is solved Next one appear We should rememeber Life is bridge And will pay For all our sins

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 2:18:00 PM
    Carol, Oh yes....I surely relate to this entry. Your last word says it all. Congratulations on your win with this gem. Soup mail

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Congratulations Carol, I love your Monoku

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 10:42:00 AM
    Congrats on your win - I like the thought in your poem...........George

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 7:29:00 AM
    Thank you to everyone for your comments and congrats. They are all truly appreciated. Love, Carol