Let's Make It Steamy

Dear Bob,

I see you here in poetry class each day
And always imagine us sharing a kiss
I’m shy, not one to put on a display
But not to reach out would be remiss

The feelings I’ve been holding inside
Are accompanied by some fantasies
I imagine our wedding, being your bride
But when I try to talk to you, I freeze

You’re such a hunk and a quarterback too!
I cheer for you during every game
There’s no way to ignore a love so true
But I doubt you even know my name

I’ll be at the dance, wearing a teal dress
So if you don’t already have a date
Let’s slow dance and share a tender caress
Go ahead and kiss me, raise my pulse rate

A more handsome classmate I’ve never seen
Your big, blue bedroom eyes are so dreamy
If another Soup gal looks your way, I’ll turn green
So seek me out and we’ll make your car steamy

Love,
Your Secret Admirer



*Written by Carolyn Devonshire for Michael’s “Passing a Love Note” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/7/2012 8:22:00 PM
So you know about steamy cars too Carolyn:) Ah, the indecisions, the fear, the wanting, all here in your verse along with the memories it brings back. Wonderful poem that I had to fave! Soup mail me so I can reply, that's the only way I get get hold of you. There's some things I would like to talk about. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 4/5/2012 11:20:00 AM
lovely piece - i bet bob's blushing, lol
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Date: 4/3/2012 2:47:00 PM
Hey! Get a room. Be careful of football players, but if you must, get one who makes a couple million a year. Luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 4/3/2012 2:42:00 AM
Ha ha, I don't know if you meant some of your poem to be humorous but I got a laugh out of some of your write! This is a great note to be passed from one hopeless romantic to a special guy she loves! I really enjoy your write that I have read this early morning! I love your poem immensely! Great Work!!
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Date: 4/3/2012 1:08:00 AM
ooh lala, steamy indeed, Carolyn! This sure would make Bob blush :D --enjoyed this one Carolyn and I wish you the best in Michael's contest! Also advanced happy Easter to you! I hope all is well with you! Hugs :D
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:15:00 PM
Nice QUARTERBACK HUNK story of LOVE! HA. I sent those lyrics to you in a comment . The song is a duo male/Female. You may wanna google it. Afghan Whigs.....it is a touching song. The lead singer is an old friend of mine from Cincinnati Ohio....Greg Dulli~ They made it kinda big for a while...had a couple Mtv vids. _ I hope you are doing good. Miss ya CD..
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Date: 4/2/2012 5:36:00 PM
this is charming and absolutely adorable! best of luck in the contest. it sounds like a winner to me!
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Date: 4/2/2012 1:59:00 PM
wow this is a steamy note for Bob. He has it all big blue eyes, a quarter back, a hunk and likes poetry. What can be better than that? ha ha GREAT poem Carolyn. love phyl
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