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A gust of wind lifted my low cold spirits high; an encouraging word that halted a downward steep glide into depression when swiftly dark clouds were gathering across the sky, erasing hope. Like soothing balm on a deep wound healing the pain of my bleeding lonely heart you spread warmth deep w i t h i n m y s > o < u l . Y o u > a < r e m y s t > r < e n g t h . ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Contest: Concrete Crush Sponsor: FJ Thomas Placed 3rd © 26th December 2016

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Date: 8/13/2018 2:55:00 PM
Wow! Paul, your artistic talents, both visually and poetically, are on full display with your beautiful and inspiring poem. Your poem flies high on uplifting zephyrs of love and hope.. Exquisite my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/13/2018 5:17:00 PM
It has been a while since I last read this poem, Susan; thank you for reminding me of its existence:) Thank you also for the lovely, encouraging compliments! ~ Warm regards & Hugs ~~ paul
Date: 2/8/2017 12:16:00 PM
Lovely merging of form and content, Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/8/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thank you, Dave. Good to see you posting again. Regards // paul
Date: 2/5/2017 1:25:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Paul I'm delighted to see this so high on the winners list:-) hugs jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2017 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I used to enjoy flying kites, so I acquired the knack to keep them flying high:) Hugs // paul
Date: 2/3/2017 9:45:00 PM
The shape is so perfect & beautiful and so is the content. Congratulations on your fine win, Paul.
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Date: 2/6/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Afzal. You did really well with your 'burning candle'. Regards // paul
Date: 2/3/2017 9:37:00 PM
Paul, you have created a wonderful uplifting shape filled with positive inspirational thoughts. Congratulations on your podium win in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Sandra...and the congrats! Regards // paul
Date: 2/3/2017 3:47:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/5/2017 4:13:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Was pleased to see you amongst the winners:) Hugs // paul
Date: 1/26/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my poem "Forgiveness". I have read some of your poems and I find this one very interesting.
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Date: 1/26/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with complimentary remarks, Mpho. Regards // paul
Date: 1/4/2017 7:50:00 AM
Also another of the better ones I have seen in this challenge, not just the shape you created, but the words are sublime!
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2017 4:28:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...you know I give importance to your comments:) I have seen some really good entries. Regards // paul
Date: 12/29/2016 6:46:00 AM
Very beautifully written, Paul:)
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Date: 12/29/2016 7:04:00 AM
Thank you for reading and liking, Victoria. Regards :) paul
Date: 12/28/2016 3:52:00 AM
This is beautiful, Paul:) :)
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Date: 12/28/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thank you, Jo:) Take care and all the best for the new year. Regards // paul
Date: 12/28/2016 3:52:00 AM
This is beautiful and very creative. Nice write Paul .
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 12/29/2016 5:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul, it's an honour to meet wonderful poets like you.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/28/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Abosede. I have been going through several of your poems and I am truly impressed. Pleased to have made your acquaintance. Regards // paul
Date: 12/27/2016 11:29:00 AM
Ha! Right on, Paul. : )
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Doug :) Regards // paul
Date: 12/27/2016 10:27:00 AM
Wow, what an impressive kite! No doubt you're flying high, nevertheless I wish you the best of luck. This is a very beautiful kite with uplifting words :)
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Date: 12/27/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you for a pleasant visit, Akkina:) Glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul
Date: 12/27/2016 9:02:00 AM
PC, Love it. Now you will have to hear, "I'll Fly Away." jth
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Date: 12/27/2016 9:19:00 AM
Pleased you like it, James. In fact, I have heard Johnny Cash sing 'I'll Fly Away' :) Regards // paul
Date: 12/27/2016 8:28:00 AM
ohh this is neat, very good Paul. hugsx
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Date: 12/27/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thank you, Casarah. Wishing you good health and a lovely ending to 2016. A big teddy bear hug to you:) // paul
Date: 12/27/2016 7:04:00 AM
- A poem I read with smiles and joy .. a great shape :) - Luck in the contest, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2016 8:52:00 AM
I am pleased that you enjoyed it, Anne-Lise:) Thank you! Hugs // paul
Date: 12/26/2016 9:11:00 PM
wow! i don't know how you did this, paul - i don't think i'd have the patience to figure it all out. the results are very impressive, though! it looks and sounds great...
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Date: 12/27/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you for your complimentary remarks, Ilene! Fortunately, I do not lack in patience:) Regards // paul
Date: 12/26/2016 5:49:00 PM
Wow!! Fabulous I have been seen a few great shapes with fantastic poem Hugs Eve
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Flo has a wealth of entries to choose from! Hugs // paul
Date: 12/26/2016 5:19:00 PM
Pretty impressive, Paul. I love the verse:) It must have taken you a little while to figure out the art. Very nicely done.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 8:21:00 AM
Oh yes, Daniel, it did take me about an hour to figure it all out. I tried it on words first, but that was of little help! Thank you for the 'like':) Regards // paul
Date: 12/26/2016 4:03:00 PM
You are flying high with this poem Paul - I agree with Tim its very uplifting:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 4:55:00 AM
Glad you like it, Jan. You did a great job with your double-swan/cob shapes! Hugs // paul
Date: 12/26/2016 3:42:00 PM
An uplifting piece Paul...love the kite
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Date: 12/27/2016 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, Tim. I suppose it's the after effects of Christmas Day!:) Regards // paul
Date: 12/26/2016 3:16:00 PM
WOW!! Awesome job Paul!! Both verse and shape!! Well done. Best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2016 3:21:00 PM
Many thanks, Deborah! Your words are very encouraging....very much like the gust of wind in my shape poem:) Hugs // paul
Date: 12/26/2016 3:08:00 PM
Very cool and creative Paul. This is a great concrete poem, the shape and the poem are amazing.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2016 3:19:00 PM
Thank you, Chris. I tried my best...not easy forming a shape while trying to make sense out of words which are not always cooperative:) Best regards // paul

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