Home » Poems » Dorian Petersen Potter » Let Love Shine Through

Dorian Petersen Potter | + Follow Poet |

Let Love Shine Through

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Dorian Petersen Potter.

(Free Style) Love can be sweet and be kind, And for me and you is right here to find, Sometimes love is just like the wind It can be gentle and destructive and make us blind Love is the best thing in this whole World, Love can be good and love can be bad, When you fall in love you can be happy And when you fall out of love you can be sad God created Love for us so good and divine, He gave us this wonderful gift to make us glad, It is up to us to make it last and fine, It is up to us to make us happy or mad Love is an emotion like there's no other one I just know, There's so much that for others we can do and with Love show. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 November,05,2014

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Paul Schneiter

Date: 11/9/2014 10:36:00 PM

Dorian, You have composed a beautiful poem that rings with truth and honesty. It's simply wonderful. Thank you for writing it—and sharing it.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/13/2014 12:19:00 AM

Hi there Paul! Thank you so much for your visit.Very nice to hear from you again. Will visit you soon again. Take care! :) xxxx D.

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/9/2014 7:14:00 AM

You have rightly said here perhaps, as I feel. Love is a divine sense so this sense should be used from proper relationships to proper beings. It should always be holy indeed. Sense of choice and choice of liking are not love, though we often say it love. If love sense is used properly, there's no bad otherwise it brings bad in many ways, as I know. So, you have rightly said,"It is up to us to make us happy or mad". Excellent and 7 indeed from my side. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/13/2014 12:25:00 AM

BL my sweet friend thank you so much for dropping by. I will visit you very soon. :) xxxx D.

Jasmine Cruz

Date: 11/8/2014 3:53:00 AM

very good Dorian I enjoyed this poem from you

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/13/2014 12:22:00 AM

Thank you Jasmine for your kindness will visit you again soon. :) xxx D

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/8/2014 2:53:00 AM

Love: The primordial force in the universe and in human soul. It is the force that tends to unite and bring happiness, what separates and brings unhappiness is not love! Wonderfully done my dear friend Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/13/2014 12:34:00 AM

What an amazing thing to say my dear friend Demetrios!And I have to agree with you, you're very wise in my eyes. And thank you so much for dropping by and all. Much appreciated by me. Will visit you soon. :) xxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2014 4:12:00 AM

- A beautiful and true love poem Dorian - Love it! - Happy weekend with lots of love !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/7/2014 4:20:00 AM

Happy to know that you love it! Thank you sweetie and the same to you. Likewise! :) love and hugs! xxoxx D.

Gry Christensen

Date: 11/6/2014 6:43:00 PM

So true, love is is a two sided coin. It colds and can provoke almost every feeling one can think of. Very nice poem this!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/7/2014 2:49:00 AM

Thats a fact, Gry! Thank you very much for dropping by and your kind comments. :) love and hugs! Xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/6/2014 5:36:00 PM

when you look at it dorian love is everything you can see in light true excellent pen very beautifully painted dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/7/2014 2:45:00 AM

That's so true, my dear friend Liam! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2014 5:23:00 PM

Beautiful write Dorian, love an emotion that can make you feel good or it can make you insane, except for the love of God a peaceful love. :) love & hugs eve

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/7/2014 2:42:00 AM

Thats so true! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your awesome comments,Eve. You're so kind my dear friend. :) love and big hugs!xxxxx D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2014 4:12:00 PM

Dear Dorian, Love truly is the most powerful emotion we are blessed to feel. Imagine what our world would be like if everyone loved one another. Your poem touched my heart, Hon. If this is for a contest, it is a winner for sure. I like the way you changed the rhyme scheme. It made the poem flow beautifully. Have a blessed day. Love, Carolyn

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/7/2014 2:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Carol, my dear friend! Can you imagine that, the world wouldn't be in the big mess is in! You too hon! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2014 10:37:00 AM

Interesting take on the topic..The opposite of love is hate and that is a strong emotion as well..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/6/2014 4:22:00 PM

I love reading your work Sara. Yes, that's quite true too if we let it heat and boil. Thank for stopping by. :) love and light! xxxx D.