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Lazy Morning Rain

Lazy morning rain Oh lazy rain Oh lazy morning rain Coming from the pervaded cloud Encompasses the sky cloud Why must you spoil this bright morning? You delay those who are going To their daily activities You delay those who are seeking for jobs Willing to study students are being dallied. you gave chance for lazy One as you to smile, go away Go away You splatter upon the roof As the sound thatchers thatching the roof Your splash onto the windows give Chance for cold to penetrate A wailing cloud it's ok, you are wailing as if you will not Wail another. You are not needed at this moment People are shivering because of your present Why don't you go and come at night? Go away Oh lazy rain Go away Oh lazy morning rain

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Date: 7/29/2015 8:55:00 PM
Many times I have myself cursed the rain! And at other times prayed for it to come. Love this poem , if you live where monsoons flourish I feel for you my friend. I could picture such a downpour as I read your poem!
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Date: 7/24/2015 6:23:00 PM
the images are lovely A.M hugs 7
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Date: 7/24/2015 2:30:00 PM
Afolabi, since May 1st to date, nearly every day in it's 24 hour cycle it's rained here in Inverness. Your fine poetry reminds me of these past 2+ months. Wishing you a blessed weekend, James :)
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:24:00 AM
I love your subject! You always give a fresh perspective on all the subject you focus on, AM. Mail... hugs!
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Date: 7/22/2015 6:03:00 AM
It's nice to see early rain passes just in time for anyone to catch the sunrise to do what he/she is supposed to accomplish. Well done. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:15:00 PM
I feel exactly this way too when I am hoping for sun to enjoy. Good one, and do you know the American rhyme: Rain rain go away, little ANDIE wants to play! Rain rain go away, come again no other day!(actually I should say "another day" but you can make up the lines as you go with this one!)
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:13:00 PM
Did I ever tell you that I am A.M. too? (Andrea Miller!) maiden name!! Let me read this one now. thanks for your sweet comment
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:31:00 PM
I like the emotive feel and descriptiveness of this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/21/2015 12:53:00 PM
i like the mood of this piece, afolabi.. been raining here too...huggs
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Date: 7/21/2015 4:58:00 AM
Well written dear friend, A.M., but rain, apart from causing all what you say, is also the heaven's blessing to mother earth!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/21/2015 6:38:00 AM
It is nice to see you face here Sir, I really appreciate your comment, yes, rain is a blessing to this Earth, but every thing have it own negative including human even this world is a world of both N and P.......A.M.
Date: 7/20/2015 10:44:00 PM
OOO, I love Rain, it makes my day perfectly lazy. I love this. Afolabi. Send them clouds over here... Enjoyed, SKAT
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/21/2015 6:03:00 AM
Thank you for your love always SKAT I appreciate your comment, at times when it rain early morning, it gives some people who did not want to go to work or some students who did want to go to school chance to rest and play at home.........A.M.
Date: 7/20/2015 8:20:00 PM
AM, oh that lazy rain, that's what I have right now and I love the sound and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/21/2015 5:50:00 AM
That is its habit, early in the morning when people are suppose to go to their daily activities that is when it will start to rain. Thank you for your comment........A.M.
Date: 7/20/2015 8:17:00 PM
Many times we crave the sun for her warmth...excellent
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/21/2015 5:43:00 AM
Yes we ofthe crave the sun we take our mind off the rain whereas they both have positive and negative side. Thank you.

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