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last night

last night was just another night
don't mind me I'll just step aside
walk on bye hang my head and just say good bye
so many people so quick to judge
someone so empty, burnt by love
if i had the chance i would change some things
rewind to yesterday and set myself free
now look at me....
I'm drowning in the bottle, thoughts feel my head
i should of listened to the music and the words it said
i wanna forget but i cant let go
never mind me no one needs to know
no mater how i try i just seem to fail
my coffins almost sealed just add a nail
I'm on the wrong track go'n nowhere fast
forget about love it never seems to last

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  1. Date: 6/9/2010 9:16:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Ronnie. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 1:02:00 PM
    great write, emotional, sensitive, clear, descriptive and i hope not very real. it seems there is always pain, even when we win. just try to stay ahead of the game. thank you and be well, chuck

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 12:19:00 PM
    you'll get over it as soon as you find someone new. john

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 12:10:00 PM
    Very emotional and heartfelt write...too bad what we go through to get them? Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 12:06:00 PM
    Sad write...I hope not your life but just a topic..Very expressive and emotive...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 11:57:00 AM
    strongly said,, don't give up just yet,, there's that "one" person out there awaiting your arival... i like the line that said "my coffins almost sealed just add a nail".. that was unique and awesome, enjoyed..p.d.