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Just as the moon rises each night and even as snow is caressed by its light, then glowing, I'll rise, becoming your dawn, your curved sleeping form to smile upon. With eyes like bright stars, I then will embrace the landscape of you, each small line on your face. And surely you’ll mirror my worshiping glow, for I am your moon and you are my snow. I’ll keep shining down with each breath you take. May I blaze in your dreams before you awake. And barely I’ll whisper, “Keep sleeping, my dear.” Your faithful beloved, I’ll always be here. 9/14/2010 it was posted here but I believe it was written several years earlier. I don't know when. Maybe before 2005! An OLD poem!! For the "Your Favorite Old Poem Contest" of shadow Hamilton

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Date: 6/9/2015 4:50:00 PM
Beautiful write Andrea...Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:51:00 AM
Andrea. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 8:58:00 AM
Brilliant and very romantic poem my friend. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:29:00 PM
An oldy but a goody...enjoyed this Andrea, congratulations
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Date: 6/8/2015 6:42:00 PM
Favorite lines: 'Then glowing, I'll rise, becoming your dawn' and 'May I blaze in your dreams before you awake'...WOW! How did I miss THIS one? Congrats and he's a VERY lucky fella...
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Date: 6/8/2015 6:10:00 PM
old is often best Andrea congrats on placing with this sweet poem hugs
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Date: 11/14/2014 5:26:00 PM
So romantic, you remind me of somone...ahhh...someone else who is really romantic...ahhhh...oh yeah me! Another brilliant poem by a brilliant poet.
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Date: 8/8/2012 12:18:00 AM
Such a romantic write....love it!!!
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:05:00 PM
ANDREA, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD
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Date: 7/26/2012 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:57:00 AM
Andrea a belated congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/25/2012 4:26:00 PM
Lovely and passionate, Andrea. I've not seen it before...I can see why it was on the favorite list. Congrats!
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Date: 7/25/2012 9:50:00 AM
Congrats once again Andrea...so romantic my friend...lovely poem!!!
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Date: 7/25/2012 9:08:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Excellent. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest.
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:27:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 7/25/2012 2:01:00 AM
Very nice poem... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 6/29/2011 11:20:00 AM
This is one of the best poems you have ever penned Andrea.....amazing poetry.
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Date: 5/8/2011 5:39:00 AM
Revisited. Wonderful!
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Date: 3/15/2011 12:23:00 PM
I discovered this gem tonight!Goes to my FAVS!So much romanticism!!--kash
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:59:00 AM
I've commented on this one before, but just had to say something again. This is breathtaking. LOve, Dave
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:40:00 PM
This is a beautiful romantic write. You feel the love of the faithful beloved. Well done. Phyl
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place, Andrea in Catie's contest. A well-merited victory for such a talented poetess! Thanks for your lovely comments. God bless. Have a wonderful day with your loved ones. Love and admiration, Andrew.
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Date: 9/27/2010 11:01:00 AM
Hi Andrea.This is lovely and such a different idea to use the moon and snow. I also found some of your imagery quite beautiful. Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comments. luv June(how I like to be known by friends)
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Date: 9/24/2010 11:26:00 AM
Very beautiful write Andrea. Congratulations on your win. I knew that one had to be in the winner's circle. Love, Connie
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