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Lake Naivasha

Modernity imposes itself upon 
eons beauty,
The sun blanketed by grey 
clouds of dusk, shining golden 
halos onto you,
Lake Naivasha, oh you serene 
grey mystery, Like polished 
silver, shine back heavens 
awesome gaze upon you

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  1. Date: 6/19/2009 1:29:00 PM
    Lovely and serene, Erastus! I can see the beautiful scene you create and wish to be transformed to that place! Well done! Donna

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 7:01:00 AM
    Great imagery, loved how smooth the story read as well and will read more of you, enjoy your day.

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 9:23:00 AM
    This is lovely imagery, sounds like a lake I would like to see. Keep that ink flowing friend. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my work, always appreciated.

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 7:51:00 AM
    Must be a great geography to inspire such a rich write ... wonderful imagery!

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 2:03:00 AM
    hiya! dear would you be interested in buying and reading a poetry collection written by me.If yes please do go to page and click on the collection link.I assure you it would be worth your while. Shishir Gupta

  1. Date: 6/7/2009 8:37:00 PM
    I had to look up "Lake Naivasha,"...Amazing! As this poem, great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/7/2009 4:07:00 PM
    one "t" in blanketed...lovely image. Light & Love