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Lady of Winter

Dear lady of winter why must you be so harsh shed your ermine wraps and put away your hooded cloak of white - beautiful as it may seem when gleaming in the cold sun like a thousand diamonds and glossy pearls the land does slumber too long the trees sleep too deeply under your strict command of days that are too dark and moons peer out from behind cell bars and prison sentences of winter discontent release the prisoners of Spring held captive by a cruel winter in dampness and bone chilling days and nights - let down your dark walls and break the fetters of those who cry out to be free and taste the delights of the newborn world once again.. and do away with this abomination known as winter..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/26/2009 11:06:00 AM
Wonderful use of allieration in this write, Valerie. As much as the season of winter can be beautiful in it's spendor - I much rather enjoy the elements of spring and summer. It's way too cold here in NYC right now! LOL! A stunning write. Peace always, John
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Date: 1/16/2009 5:42:00 PM
Great job in the personifcation of this one, Valerie! Seems like Lady Winter is not very agreeable to be hanging around much longer...hope she gets booted out soon! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/16/2009 4:06:00 PM
Awesome Personification and clever write. Usually I would protest as I am a fall and winter girl, however, this winter has been so harsh already, I am embracing thoughts of Spring! 'She' does seem quite cruel this year! Hang in, time moves swiftly. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/16/2009 2:27:00 PM
LOL "this abomination known as winter" I like the personification as in "put away your ermine wraps" Nicely done
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