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Kissed

The warm fragrant waves move seductively from the shore Teasing the sand with its frothy white lure Fervently the scorching sand awaits each lap of cool relief I traipse over the sunkissed beach in utter disbelief Oh how gloriously serene this moment is With each periodic waves gentle caress My upheavel unveils into an entrenched grave I can seee it withdraw with each receding wave Serenity prevails, anonymity I so crave All transpire here in this infinite space With luscious landscapes and airy splashes Salty caresses and spellbinding washes With azure smudges in a cerulean base I stare this wonder in its open face Oh how peaceful to slumber In this intimate wonder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/4/2009 8:57:00 AM
Dear Fathima - Congratulations on your WIN in Laura's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:53:00 PM
Fathima wonderful poetry - congratulations on placing in Laura's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/3/2009 5:00:00 PM
Good use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the love for the ocean contest. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 3/2/2009 10:47:00 PM
Congrats.. wonderful write... great imagery! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:55:00 PM
Such peaceful moments in your seas, Fathima! A delight to read, and a worthy selection to represent the benign force of the ocean. Congrats on your worthy honorable mention on Laura McKenzie's "Love for the Ocean" contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:45:00 AM
This peaceful and beautiful poem was so lovely and well deserving to be among the winners! Congratulations!!~ ~Carrie
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:25:00 AM
YAY! Warmest congrats Fathima on your awesome win in Laura's contest! Love, Shar
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