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Kiss of Life

When I was weak, And all seemed bleak, You showed up, And gave me a peep, Into tomorrow, From then, Everything changed, You took my heart, And kept it, Grew it, Protected it, Of you, I have sweet memories, Our running in the sand, Towards the sun, Our warm nights of July, And now, I'm positive, With new life, The next generation, Of bright life, A product, Of our love, I will never forget, When we first met, But for now, Let me stop, And say thank you, That I met you, When our eyes met, And you gave me, The wet,red lip, The chilling,killing smooch, The kiss of life. Word Craft 2013

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Date: 4/30/2013 5:49:00 PM
Wow, another impressive poem! Lucky to have stumbled upon your work today. This invokes such a beautiful, vivid picture. I like a poem that gets under my skin. "the chilling, killing smooch" Well said! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/2/2013 2:29:00 AM
Aw Thank you Laura for your beautiful views,Your pieces are deeper,I'm glad you loved the piece..thanks once again and nice time dear..Word Craft.. :-)
Date: 4/10/2013 4:11:00 AM
- A truly romantic poem Word. - Must every day feels like a sweet kiss. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) (I posted "Just a Kiss" yesterday)
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Date: 4/10/2013 4:29:00 AM
Anne i must confess,-Just A Kiss- is soooo "toxic".....the type you cant read without responding to :-)
Date: 4/9/2013 12:19:00 PM
WICKED LIKE THIS WHATS COOL ALSO i HAVE WROTE A POEM LAST YEAR FOR COMPOTISON ON HERE WITH SAME TITLE LOVE THIS AND THNKS FOR COMENTS ON MINE DAV IDSCOTT
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Date: 4/10/2013 4:20:00 AM
hehehehe Dave..thanks for your views..let me find the twin version of it you did :-)
Date: 4/3/2013 8:14:00 AM
Excellent piece here..reminds me of some of the thoughts in a poem I wrote.
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Date: 4/8/2013 4:13:00 AM
Oh thank you Script...kindly give me the title i'd love to look it up a enjoy the beauty that streams from a a beautiful poetic mind such as yours :-)
Date: 2/27/2013 6:56:00 AM
very good job on this my friend..
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Date: 2/27/2013 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Betty...your work is better..thanks to amazing poets like you..I'm learning something new each day, thank you:-)
Date: 2/15/2013 7:28:00 AM
lovely poem and to.say.thankyou and have.gratitude makes it more special..Charma
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Date: 2/21/2013 1:32:00 AM
Thanks Charma..for your uplifting comments :-)
Date: 2/13/2013 3:09:00 PM
intresting thoughts you have penned here.
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:56:00 AM
Most thankful John..am so humbled :-)
Date: 2/13/2013 7:11:00 AM
Dear Sir, A very thoughtful and sentimental writing that touches the heart without leaving indifferent the mind!
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:59:00 AM
Deeply humbled sir..it's an honor to have your views...once again thank you Demetrios:-)

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