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Kiss Goodbye

I’ll blow you a kiss when I leave But I’m off with my lover to Paris The thought of you makes me heave I know all about you and fat Alice You said you were working late But that’s just been a pack of lies You were discovered in bed on that date With that moo with the wobbly thighs Guess that two can play at that game I think its time to call it a day We can both hang our heads in shame As I’ve gone off with her hubby Ray 4th September 2014 Contest: The Poet II Sponsored by Gautami Phookan

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 9/17/2014 5:10:00 AM

It has a good rhyme and you wrote so well! Congrats Jan and thank you for participating in my contest...smiles!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2014 5:21:00 AM

I really enjoyed entering the contest and I thank you for your lovely comments:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/16/2014 1:12:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, Jan. Love and prayers, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 1:14:00 AM

Many thanks Gina:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/14/2014 11:07:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2014 1:02:00 AM

Thanks Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan x

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/14/2014 7:57:00 PM

Back with my congratulations for this poem that keeps me smiling.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2014 1:01:00 AM

If I made you smile i did a good job I like to try and write with humour:-) Hugs jan xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/14/2014 6:36:00 PM

Quite the lover's game. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2014 1:01:00 AM

thanks Joyce:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/14/2014 2:48:00 PM

Well deserved win Jan...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2014 3:14:00 PM

Thanks Tim its just made me smile reading it back now:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2014 2:15:00 PM

If you can't beat them, join them. Duh, there I go with music tones again. This time by 'Queen' wunderbar Jan. I'm glad I'm not living next door to Alice, jee's!! there I go again ;-) xx I'm Smokie'ing xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 2:29:00 PM

who the beep is Alice I remember that version too James LOl. Saw Queen at Knebworth 1986 best gig EVER! Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2014 9:51:00 AM

Nice poetic write, nice rhyming, good luck, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 10:16:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Mehta:-) I do appreciate your feedback, Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2014 8:53:00 AM

Getting even isn't hard to do is it..Very emotive and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Sara:- Hugs Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/5/2014 5:43:00 AM

Tit for tat/ What a funny game/ If both can do it/ Is there any shame? I have enjoyed it! Its well written, funny and profound. An excellent work, dear Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 6:07:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comment Demetrios:-) Where this came from goodness knows but it just flowed from my pen :-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 2:04:00 AM

Lovely write Jan! Love the humour! Do u think that we will let you leave n can do wid that kiss forever,, no girl! Go in contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 3:42:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Sharma:-) I wonder if stuff like this ever happens - but it is pure fiction on my part - hubby laughed when i read it to him:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/5/2014 1:49:00 AM

Oooh, I love this one, Jan. Betrayal of one partner evokes betrayal from the other. An excellent entry for Guatami's contest! Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 3:41:00 AM

I have no idea where this came from was going to do sad and ended doing happy:-) Hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/4/2014 7:13:00 PM

Great humor as always Jan. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 7:14:00 PM

Thanks Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/4/2014 6:52:00 PM

Not fair, talking about my thighs...lol this is hysterical and I will be laughing for awhile. BG

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 6:57:00 PM

Thanks Barbara. I feel I have done a good job if I make people smile from my poems:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/4/2014 6:40:00 PM

ha! this one cracked me up! i love the line about her "wobbly thighs" - perfect!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 6:56:00 PM

I have no idea where this write came from Eileen in fact I was going to do one about kissing my dying dad goodbye - but thankfully silliness won the day:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/4/2014 3:38:00 PM

I thought you'd be off with his mother Faye with the hair so gray and perhaps is gay...but I won't say...haha....loved it Jan hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 3:41:00 PM

Ohhhh greying men... mmmmmmm Don't start me off Tim! Hugs Jan xxxx

Christine Costello

Date: 9/4/2014 2:18:00 PM

Ah revenge is so sweet. I loved this one. :-) Christine

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 2:20:00 PM

I like the twist at the end :-) Hugs Jan xxx