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King of Flame

King of flame, you are Out of globe but majestic Burn the skin quickly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/23/2013 10:38:00 AM
Strong feeling for loved one touches quickly so awe inspiring. Excellent secret of love. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/23/2013 5:04:00 AM
I don't believe King SOL ever had such praise... Well done, my friend.... Well done indeed.... Jake
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/23/2013 7:32:00 AM
thanks John
Date: 6/15/2013 11:52:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. tfs
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/23/2013 8:40:00 AM
thanks u
Date: 6/15/2013 10:20:00 AM
Wonderfully done very dynamic and heart burning!
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/23/2013 7:33:00 AM
thank u Dem
Date: 6/15/2013 2:49:00 AM
Nicely done Elai,I like it.
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/23/2013 8:41:00 AM
like also ur poems
Date: 6/15/2013 12:45:00 AM
That's why it is good to have a dependable sunscreen when you are outdoors. Nice write.
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/15/2013 12:48:00 AM
hehehe big correct!
Date: 6/13/2013 10:28:00 AM
i feel the simmering heat, so well done.. i like!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/13/2013 9:58:00 AM
Heh, if you play with fire...excellent job! :)
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Date: 6/12/2013 10:01:00 AM
Good imaging in a perfect Haiku
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Date: 6/12/2013 8:22:00 AM
I like it.
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Date: 6/11/2013 3:47:00 AM
napaso ka siguro kaya mo nasulat to nuh? Nice!
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/12/2013 7:34:00 AM
hehehe correct! swimming swimming din pag may time NAto hahaha,... thank yah
Date: 6/9/2013 8:35:00 AM
yes to this one.. great aha moment on the 3rd line... well done!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/8/2013 4:11:00 PM
an enjoyable Haiku Elai, ~alaways, Lidna
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Date: 6/7/2013 6:39:00 AM
Nicely penned Elai,haiku's is a favourite of mines
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Date: 6/7/2013 1:45:00 AM
- True, well done Elai! - Have a delicious weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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