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Kia Pet

Kia pet has painted skin shiny as a pearl. And I give her this name too. She is “Silver Girl.” She is not the prettiest or the fastest pet. But at least with my sweet girl, I don’t have to fret. . . Up to now a trusty friend although I’ve been told that she might become a mess once she gets too old. So I try to treat her well. Kia looks good clean, and I wash the dirt off her to enjoy her sheen. And I’ve put cute covers where her front riders sit. Each one has pink butterflies decorating it! I‘d sure love to dress her up; make her stand out more, but I‘m still five years in debt thanks to that “pet” store! *Kia Pet is now about half a year old and gets much better gas mileage than my old but wonderful Mustang!

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Date: 2/27/2011 11:47:00 AM
ode to a car..ok..look.! it has to stop i am not reading on its birthday..Ha Ha.enjoyed the write Andrea, all the best.
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Date: 2/23/2011 5:28:00 AM
Cool piece Andrea and a lovely read .. full of delightful words .. thankxx for sharing .. I needed a little pick me up today.. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:00:00 PM
Nice ode to your car, They are like pets in many ways. Well done
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:39:00 PM
Cute lil' write here dear poet ! I take it you adore your lil' pony ! *smiles* much love my friend ! james
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:20:00 AM
What fun! A love poem to your car. LOL Enjoyed, Andrea. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2011 9:07:00 AM
Interesting work..I would forget to water it and it would be a pile of dead...Sara
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Date: 2/22/2011 6:27:00 AM
Changed the last line and thanks for the info. Nice to know. Al and I slept in so have to run him to work as we only have one car which is about 8 miles away. ttyl phyl
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Date: 2/22/2011 12:28:00 AM
Wish i was your Pet Andrea, I'm silver, or is that the colour grey? enjoyed this. Harry
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:57:00 PM
This is exciting..Just as you were signing off, I was signing in, Andrea. Thanks for the comment. This new form looks very interesting and would like to try it, sometime. Always, Audrey
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Date: 2/21/2011 12:52:00 PM
Vroom vroom of a poem Andrea, nice one....:)
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Date: 2/21/2011 11:39:00 AM
Hi Andrea :) I really should try writing in this form :) and whoa! has it been almost 6 months now? OK time flies by too fast! I enjoyed reading this-what a very cute write for your Kia --you even have pink butterflies?? way too cute :) hugs to you :)
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Date: 2/21/2011 10:54:00 AM
I had a Kia Pet once. Things didn't work out at all. The thing is still sitting in a box in the basement. I like your 7/5 Trochee and plan to write something using it. Love, daver
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Date: 2/21/2011 9:55:00 AM
You love her too much, isn't it Andrea?Love this cute poem .Very nicely written.----kashinath
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Date: 2/21/2011 9:28:00 AM
A very good experiment in writing...enjoyed the write and the words....... Thanks for all the very nice comments...........George
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Date: 2/21/2011 9:21:00 AM
Andrea - catching up on minute details makes the fantasy look like real...........nice flow. Yeah, it was nice of you to glance thru' my poem," silence not just opposite of voice" and leave encouraging comments as always. Luv & Best wishes always .....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/21/2011 8:54:00 AM
Cute poem Andrea BUT my family was under orders to never buy me a kia pet or fear being disowned by their grandmother. One of the big stores was selling president kia pets. Our best loved presidents with grass growing out of their hollow heads. Ugh. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/21/2011 8:50:00 AM
Hello Andera I love the line 5 years in debt thanks to that pet, Please read my poem for you are I hope you enjoy it
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Date: 2/21/2011 5:53:00 AM
Nice experiment with the new form with personfication of Kia, Andrea
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:58:00 AM
andrea, sighing here for this affectionate, well-scribed piece... kia lightens my day! astoundingly unique! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/20/2011 11:43:00 PM
Nice writing. Are you sure this style has not been previously invented? Either way, your presentation is impressive.
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