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The haunted castle looms ahead, I feel a sudden chill and wonder should I turn and leave or venture up the hill. Approaching it, I see a flash and glimpse a ghostly shape, that walks upon the crumbling keep - my instincts scream: escape! I try to run but cannot move and wish I hadn't come; I try to speak but find I am by now completely dumb. The figure, huge with glowing eyes, is staring down at me, as silently I pray for help and feel I have to flee. But then a second ghost appears; embracing, they both leap - the night returns to peaceful calm, as now the lovers sleep.

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Date: 10/31/2023 4:37:00 PM
That is great and I like the unexpected ending of your poem Jack. Have a great evening. love phyl
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Date: 10/31/2023 2:08:00 PM
A dream. Wake up! Wake up! Love it.
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:49:00 AM
ghost love. haha. You were saved by romance. Very interesting take on Keep , my friend.
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:24:00 AM
Why go to heaven when we have this. For some this would be heaven.I'm a romantic so I love this.
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Date: 10/30/2023 3:40:00 PM
Phew, that certainly was a timely distraction, Jack! A good twist to end it all. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/29/2023 9:03:00 AM
Switching tracks Jack, an entertaining write!
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Date: 10/29/2023 8:44:00 AM
I like the change from totally scary to a love affair. LOL..Thanks for sharing your creativity with us and for dropping by my pages. Sara K
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