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Kaleidoscope of Butterflies

*****lol first attempt at Sehra, form..if I have failed will another wordsmith share their knowledge?:) Kaleidoscope of Butterflies ~Tenors, base, all creating an seemingly endless hum… from beginning through songs duration……Tenors and base humming… in background sounding on and off, … in background… Universe, space, stratosphere ATMOSPHERE, Earth’ Joins two souls together ( Chorus, repeat 3x,s) …..A likened to butterflies through a kalei’do’scope, we come together…..freely choosing to bond alike butterflies resting in moonlit fields, we come together… Forest green, reddest-red, Blue-citron silken veils Brightly adorned faces, non-so lovely as bride, Le fem’ (Chorus) Alike a rainbow Colors expressing a Universal Atmosphere Vibing radiantly, spilling-over, covering Earth FULL of light and happiness at the resonance of vows ( Chorus, final) Jill ~ for contest of Julia Ward ~ 5~15~2016

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Date: 7/14/2016 4:41:00 AM
wow I see you like butterflies too - what an unusual form you have shared with us:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/17/2016 3:25:00 PM
So unusual. I don't know anything about this form, but you did a pretty poem! and thanks so much for your words on my recent poem.
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Date: 5/17/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful poem. Your poem is probably the first of its kind on Poetry soup. Never seen it in English. ~karam~
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/27/2016 7:23:00 AM
Karam, all apologies for taking so long to reply. If you ever get a minute please teach me what you know of sehra. I searched and found very little. Did I do it correctly? Hope to hear from you...truly, jill :)
Date: 5/17/2016 2:41:00 AM
Oblivious I am to this form but not the beauty this poem conveys, Complimenti cara, jill! Mille bazi!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/27/2016 7:20:00 AM
Demetrios, una propria un'altra, belle, wise soul. Ti ringrazio molto...jill

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