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Justice Just Is

without admission broken can never be fixed~ standing or kneeling

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Sharon Keely

Date: 7/31/2020 10:35:00 AM

Packs a truly powerful punch.

Daniel Schack

Date: 7/13/2020 12:31:00 PM

simple, succinct, and right to the point. absence of justice just isn't. thanks for feedback on mine, more welcome if possible. be well.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/14/2020 8:04:00 AM

Thank you Daniel. Will try, on both accounts. xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2020 3:08:00 AM

Powerfully accurate my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/14/2020 8:04:00 AM

Thank you <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2020 3:43:00 PM

a short poem with very stong impact. RIGHT on.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/12/2020 6:33:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! :))))

Judy Ball

Date: 7/8/2020 6:10:00 PM

Nicely done. So true. There are some things that just can't be fixed. God Bless,JB

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/12/2020 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Judy. We should never stop trying, xomo

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/7/2020 1:55:00 PM

You just keep giving super Mo, might have to upgrade you to “Mo the great” well deserved with these words of true stature cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/7/2020 3:34:00 PM

You're too kind! But I'll take it where I can get it. ...hugs, from the Mostest ~x

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/6/2020 6:19:00 PM

Great poem! Well written, I enjoyed this one and thought about it for a while.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/7/2020 7:22:00 AM

Thank you Timothy! You make this poet very happy. Have a lovely day! xomo

Thomas Wells

Date: 7/6/2020 11:26:00 AM

A very thought provoking message expressed in very compact language, giving it so much power. I loved it. Well done! xxoo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/6/2020 6:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Thomas! xomo

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 7/6/2020 11:10:00 AM

Very cleverly written and, more importantly, a very worthy and timely message; great stuff, Mo.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/6/2020 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Lawrence. Take care, xomo!

Annie Lander

Date: 7/6/2020 8:20:00 AM

well put.. Poetry is about finding our own voices.. keep up the good work.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/6/2020 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Annie... and you <3

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/6/2020 7:01:00 AM

Superbly written my dearest, Maureen! Very clever! Hugs xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/6/2020 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Sweet D! I hope you are having a wonderful day <3 xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2020 7:05:00 PM

Precisely! So true. A great reality-check senryu, Maureen. Ciao, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/6/2020 7:34:00 AM

Muchas gracias mi amigo ~x

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/5/2020 5:09:00 PM

I swear, at first I read this as 'justice = just us' - but it is true, justice is what we do to fix it, too-

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/6/2020 7:33:00 AM

I like that, and that too. xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2020 2:17:00 PM

TRUE ! - XX //

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/5/2020 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise! xomo :)))

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/5/2020 1:50:00 PM

right on, maureen! (write on, as well!)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/5/2020 1:53:00 PM

Thank you Ilene! Tee hee ;), xomo!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/5/2020 1:50:00 PM

Could you please tattoo this on Trump's forehead? Aloha! Rico

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/6/2020 1:41:00 PM

Mahalo for the laugh! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/5/2020 1:52:00 PM

...not to mention I'm not that handy with a ten foot pole lol

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/5/2020 1:51:00 PM

I wouldn't waste the ink ;), xomo!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/5/2020 1:46:00 PM

such sharp ink Mo, into my faves!!!:-) hugs jan x

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/5/2020 1:50:00 PM

Wow thank you Jan! Sometimes I just don't know how far "out there" my muse sends me~ if anyone else will get me ;), Hugs! xomo