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There are many miraculous accounts from old journals
of LDS pioneers who crossed the plains in the 1800's
to make a home in Utah. This is my sonnet rendition
of one such story which I read about in a church magazine.
Here is just one source where you can read about this faithful
woman:
http://ldswomenshistory.blogspot.com/2010/03/mary-ann-mellor-and-louisa-mellor-clark.html )</center>
The Martin Handcart Company endured a frightful winter in their journey west. Yet through it all, they would not be deterred, for with strong faith and hope these Saints were blessed. Louisa Mellor, in her journal, gave accountings of their hardships in the cold and told of how they struggled to be brave while many died, especially the old. They'd shovel snowy roads, and they would wade through icy streams; her mom once stayed behind, kissed them bye and wept; Louisa stayed and prayed. When she arose, what did she find? The Lord must not hate sweets, for she would spy nearby on snow for sustenance a PIE! *There are many miraculous accounts from old journals of LDS pioneers who crossed the plains in the 1800's to make a home in Utah. This is my sonnet rendition of one such story which I read about in a church magazine. Here is just one source where you can read about this faithful woman: http://ldswomenshistory.blogspot.com/2010/03/mary-ann-mellor-and-louisa-mellor-clark.html ) For the FAITH contest of Diane Christian

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Date: 11/16/2020 11:39:00 PM
The west was no place for the weak. I like how you turned this account of the faithful into an historically based sonnet.
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Date: 10/14/2012 10:18:00 AM
having lived both in New Zealand and Australia, Andrea, the old pioneers have a special place in my thoughts, we own them a lot, where ever in the world they ventured.. this is a lovely dedication to them all....
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:35:00 PM
I love your enjambment... (I think I said that before!) This is a wonderful look back into history. Those old settlers endured so much in their journey toward a new home. Well done, Andrea! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/16/2012 12:25:00 PM
wow, I love this fascinating write, Andrea
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Date: 6/15/2012 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win on the contest. Wow, that is an amazing story. love phyl
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Date: 6/14/2012 5:31:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/14/2012 3:24:00 PM
should have been much higher. Interesting. I clicked on "About this Poem" but got nothing but ads. J
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Date: 6/14/2012 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Diane's "Faith" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2012 1:02:00 PM
A most beautiful and meaningful entry Andie. Soup mail
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Date: 6/14/2012 4:39:00 AM
Yes,a captivating story here Andrea.Very nice write on faith.Enjoyed.
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Date: 6/14/2012 2:53:00 AM
manna from heaven , faith to bread or cake, the lord is mysterious , 4 miracles we do ache....
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Date: 6/13/2012 2:53:00 PM
Talk about mana from heaven. You do teach us many things Andrea. It is amazing where you will see your faith if you just look. Thank you for your comment on Sultry City Sidewalks. I wrote it for the contest. Luck to you and yours. That's what Gomer used to always say. :)
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Date: 6/13/2012 2:36:00 PM
This was truly intriguing and inspiring to learn of Andrea; also.." I notice 3 ha'ha's as in ha ha ha, that you thought me worthy of L O L.." I thought I'd probably earned a few more than that you know!! now ya see how there's just no pleasing some folks..)
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Date: 6/13/2012 9:15:00 AM
A wonderful story, all the more so because it is true. Best of luck in the faith contest. I like your title.
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:59:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE! (You're Mormon, I just know it!) LOVE< =Juli-Michelle=
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:49:00 AM
another beautiful sonnet Andrea....good luck in the contest...hugs...Joseph
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Date: 6/13/2012 5:37:00 AM
Great story told and wonderful that someone would perserve the journal..Winners' circle for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara
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Date: 6/13/2012 5:10:00 AM
like it alot That's a beautiful expressed story poem. I enjoyed reading it,thank you my friend andrea
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Date: 6/13/2012 5:08:00 AM
This was a tragic story ! 280 soul perished because of their faith ! Awesome for you to reignite this story from so many years ago dear poet. Wow ! Nice job Andrea ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james....Soup mail in a minute
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Date: 6/12/2012 10:03:00 PM
That's a beautiful expressed story poem. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich.
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:08:00 PM
What a glorious write my friend! I just love the message you gave us! I would sure like to have a piece of that pie right now! Do you think it was, butterscotch pie? Ha Ha! What a magnificent poem Andrea, I really enjoyed it! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:37:00 PM
WONDERFUL POEM, WINNING WISHES!!!
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