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Just Breathe

To what do I owe this sweetest pleasure Of optimism's grand procession When days are weighed then carefully measured And trials find their hope in recession True, there are moments when my heart gives out Like worn out jeans give way at the knees Or cobblestone walkways forfeit their grout Those fears hang on my heart just to tease Then comes the sigh deflating every care Like a flower blossom seeking the sun Forgetting the chill of yesterday's night Growing strong in the warmth as it comes In the flash of a moment In the twinkling of an eye Giving in to the torment Or rejecting the lie For every storm runs out of rain The winds will find their end Trials they change as quickly as they came Such anxiety we need not expend So here I inhabit optimism Like falsehood resides in a lie Like the doubtless avoids all pessimism Just breathe... All it took was a sigh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 3:17:00 PM
This is beautiful and calming...Thanks, sweet one! Your visits always bring me a smile. This was penned so well. What talent!
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Date: 12/9/2013 6:55:00 PM
When we tense up and are under stress it is amazing how a long breath can help centre us. You have the right attitude my new friend. It's best to occupy the land of optomisim.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2013 11:32:00 AM
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/10/2013 11:15:00 AM
Always appreciate your visits Richard... Many the sigh the holidays can bring for sure. Stay sweet :-)
Date: 12/9/2013 12:29:00 PM
Ahh, the deepest, yet simplest of pleasures. Utterly beautiful. That last stanza, magnificent.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/10/2013 11:12:00 AM
Deep gratitude my friend! XOXOX
Date: 12/8/2013 9:08:00 PM
Sarai, I found your work to be beautifully penned!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/10/2013 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Chuck. So nice to make your acquaintance
Date: 12/8/2013 7:06:00 AM
very beautifully penned piece
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Sarai Virden
Date: 12/9/2013 3:19:00 AM
Thank you Liam, that means so much... Hope all is well with you! Hugs XOXOX

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