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Just A Woman

As a woman, I am vain. I saw myself being loved and adored, without thinking that illusion is like a ROSE - it only lives for a short time. You talked to me about your love and made me feel so special. With your words you hypnotized me and made me go into a daze. I imagined myself being in heaven - a heaven so blue with only you. Taking advantage of my daze, you said, let me kneel so I can adore you. Seeing you on your knees - I gave you a kiss. I kissed you with fire, I kissed you with passion. It's not your fault and it's not mine - for love and passion are not a crime. I have to confess, that a kiss of passion - even if it almost drives you insane - it's the greatest pleasure you can feel, when two people feel the same. I'm just a woman - what do you know? If I'm having a dream, it feels so real. So why don't you come and awaken me and make my dream become real...
Copyright: Written By Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:44:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:39:00 AM
    This was so beautiful. I loved it! A Kiss of passion is to die for.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 2:00:00 AM
    Very nice, love it, love it, love it!!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Bittersweet... bitter because it was only a dream, sweet because of the beauty of your message. May your dream become reality! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 2:10:00 PM
    beautiful poetry, and one where your question deserves to be answeered...,

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 8:15:00 PM
    You aren't just a woman... you are a woman who is an AMAZING poet! Lucilla, this is astonishing :)

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 1:34:00 PM
    Couldn't wait to see what happened at the end, a dream, did expect that. All though love dreams can be steamy. Lol warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 7:33:00 PM
    You really got to me here,Lucilla. Words of the heart written with passion. :o)

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Nice way to describe love. In your second verse, "hipnotized" is correctly spelled "hypnotized". Everything else looks good.

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Appealing poem. Wonderful expression. Loved always, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 1:25:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..To be awaken from a romatic dream would be good only if it wasn't a dream..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 7:51:00 AM
    This is a stunner xx

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:29:00 AM
    is this for the fantasy contest? If not, I think it should be. I really enjoyed reading this one. Finally I have to get off here. YOu are my last poem for the night (I mean morning now!!!)

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:18:00 PM
    dear sweet Lucilla... very impressive... thank you my poetess..enjoyed so much your penned ... <3

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 5:25:00 PM
    What a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! A great display of want and desire, to be filled with passion yet again! I loved reading this fine poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:23:00 PM
    Ahh to dream..yes..I bet you have had a lot of great kisses. Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:17:00 PM
    Lucy, a beautiful poem... the ending made me think of a small part from one of Edgar Allen P. quote.. "" ___a dream with in a dream ______ "" Are we nearly just standing by, till we are woken by the perfect maker... I like my day dreams... sometimes I wish a few of them were reality. nice open expression. love~LINDA

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 1:22:00 PM
    Beautiful piece form the heart... Love it.. xoox Michael

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:52:00 AM
    My dear a woman is not just a woman she is: WOMAN Woman: this masterpiece of divine Inspiration, That is a challenging ladder for any man to climb Which may lead him to heaven Or to hell, Pending on his understanding, of her, Degree! ©Demetrios Trifiatis 9 December 2012 Read also Cupid if you wish. EXCELLENT piece of potry. Full of deep, real, feelings. Written by the heart!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:32:00 AM
    Without love, the "rose" die. - Without water "rose" will thirst. - Without light "rose" will fade. - Without a hand to hold, the "rose" being lonely. - Everybody needs LOVE!! - Lovely Lucilla my dear friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)