July Sky

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Entry: "The Sky in July"
Contest Judged: 7/17/2022
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
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The July sky is drawing nigh Ensuring blue infinity. We soar above the clouds so high To contemplate divinity.

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Date: 7/17/2022 10:59:00 AM

a simple but beautiful little rhyme. Sounds like maybe they are in a balloon? Congrats in my contest

Andy Chunn
Date: 7/18/2022 4:54:00 PM

Thank you Andrea....and thanks for sponsoring the contest. Probably a soaring fighter jet. My son was a Marine pilot. Good wishes to you.

Date: 7/8/2022 10:28:00 AM

The sky does have shades of divinity, this is lovely~

Andy Chunn
Date: 7/8/2022 6:37:00 PM

There is something about being above the clouds that is meditative. Thanks for your input.