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Why should contritions in the soul abide, 
invoking alterations that times slayed, 
and one dissolved, never existent blade, 
why sharply cuts the mind and bleeds its stride? 

Why the damnation of the man should bring
to heavens where my dark betrayal was
a solemn reason to destroy the cause, 
so that the Overman be crowned as King? 

Now the brigades of fallen angels cry, 
inhuman was the prophecy beheld, 
because my tears shall not reverse the quelled, 
and innocents, in doom shall be awry! 

I followed what the apostles refused, 
the darkest 'mid the actions of a man, 
my children will be cursed but won't disband, 
what sacred ideologies perused.

The Judas' tears will flow along the slopes, 
forsooth becharmed are the females' night dreams, 
my blood and eyes in their dimensions beam, 
Lit embers' chosen man in Cosmos' scopes.

And how traumatic eyes of austere norms, 
in their aporia will avoid me for
as chosen man, I just obeyed to Lord, 
amid the thunder's wrath my guilt reforms! 

The solitude where I condemned my fate, 
awaits in astral Halls where darkness fades, 
cause nothingness will crown the lightless shades, 
hung oscillates a marionette's oblate.

© G.V 03-09-2013
(Iambic Pentameter)

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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 3:05:00 PM
    soup mail. .... I missed the contest. .. now im sad....I looked up the contest and it's not there...

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Judas must have felt so many despicable emotions after fulfilling his deceitful deed.. the poem is wrought with regretful emotion ...great write :)

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 12:05:00 AM
    Judas is so accursed and this poem makes me feel how he must feel after his betrayal of Christ!

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Hello Giorgio, wow... what a fate. hung evenly through the stars. Reading this gave the vivid story of the darkness he shed on the world... always~ Linda

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    Date: 6/2/2013 5:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda.