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Journey From Reality

REALITY factual, undeniable tormenting, questioning, binding concrete, lucid, wispy, ethereal refreshing, tantalizing, liberating surreal, passion dipped DREAMS PS......I JUST wrote this and decided it enter it into Dr Ram's contest when LO and BEHOLD....I find the VERY same words put there as an example..Reality....and Dreams.....HOW STRANGE IS THAT???????? Well, since I HONESTLY had not seen that before writing mine, I'm going to keep this up...but obviously, can't join the contest....Imagine!

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/1/2013 4:30:00 PM

a very beautifully crafted piece eileen

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/31/2013 8:25:00 PM

"I have seen, the fantasy queen, I told myself that I would feel life, I made a good start, then it all fell apart, I don't like, the real life". Lines from The Rock Follies. This a beautiful write my little Desert Orchid. Still, out of dreams comes reality. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:38:00 PM

What a profound post, Mr Seal...You have intrigued me NO END! Never heard of Rock Follies...I'm so curious now...The Fantasy Queen...what's she like???? Lovely post, Richard...Thanks for the visit! :) No teasing today???? ;)

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/31/2013 4:03:00 PM

Hi Eileen, Very creative... Ken

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:37:00 PM

Thanks, Ken....glad you liked it! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/31/2013 12:39:00 PM

hmmm.. join, eileen.. this is a delight.. ask dr, ram.. go!..huggs to you,,:)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:36:00 PM

Thanks, Nette....I appreciate the comment and the visit.....We'll see! Perhaps I will enter another one! Leave it a surprise! ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2013 9:29:00 AM

Hi Eileen, I checked my mail but there was no message from you???

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:35:00 PM

That's all solved now!

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/31/2013 9:20:00 AM

Great minds, Eileen. :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:35:00 PM

Awwwwwwww....isn't that sweet! :) Thanks, Drake!!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2013 8:52:00 AM

Listen to Dr. Ram, the Doctor knows best!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:34:00 PM

:) Do they now? Well, I will give it due consideration, Richard...Thanks for the visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/31/2013 8:50:00 AM

Exhilarating, captivating, descriptive, imaginative and purely dreamy! Good luck Eileen! 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:34:00 PM

What an amazing string of adjectives, my dear poet. I'm so thankful for your visit and kind remarks! :) Me Agapi

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/31/2013 12:22:00 AM

I think you can post it, may the title or the first/last nouns are the same, Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/1/2013 3:31:00 PM

You are very kind, Dr Ram. I think I will post a diamante I wrote some time ago...Just so there will be some difference...or perhaps come up with a new one! :) Thanks anyway for the visit....