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Jive In a Beehive

Doing the jive in a beehive Can be detrimental to your life Performing high kicks With pointy toed flicks Will cause the bees to sting your behind 07/08/13 Heather's "Make Me Laugh" Contest

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/22/2013 4:06:00 PM

This is a clever and humorous write. I can just picture a tiny person trying to dance in a hive. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Habits poem. Glad you enjoyed it.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 10/22/2013 4:27:00 PM

Thank you for commenting. Glad you found the humor

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/30/2013 3:51:00 PM

Sweet as honey! This was very fun and whimsical, and it put a smile on my face today! Great work, Karen!...Thank you for the kind comments, once again!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 9/30/2013 4:21:00 PM

Kelly, glad you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/7/2013 7:58:00 AM

Funny limerick... great stuff... Terry

Karen Anglesey
Date: 9/7/2013 9:36:00 AM

Hi Terry, thank you for stopping by. :)

John Posey

Date: 8/29/2013 1:51:00 PM

I'm so captivated by your writing that I didn't notice your straying from the rhyming pattern.... I found the humor over came the unintentional and resulted in a great little chuckle.... Love ya dearly.... Jake

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/29/2013 2:36:00 PM

I think I'll say away from limericks. It was fun to try it once though. Thankyou :)

Aiden Asoll

Date: 8/23/2013 3:44:00 AM

Fun, simple, straight to the point and you can't ignore that metaphor, nice poem.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/23/2013 6:36:00 AM

Ha ha ... wouldn't ignore being stung on the behind for sure...thank you for reading :)

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/22/2013 7:59:00 AM

This piece made me tee-hee. Cute, clever; very fun piece to read :)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/22/2013 8:10:00 AM

I'm glad you had some fun with it :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/19/2013 6:06:00 AM

lol...adored this one...most the summers wasps sunbathed on my car and I tried everything to dodge them when entering my car... I am glad they didn't sting my behind :)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/19/2013 6:24:00 AM

Just doing a stab at a limerick. Glad you found it funny. Thank you :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 8/11/2013 1:39:00 PM

Love this poem with the surprise ending. Thanks for putting a smile in my heart and giving me a good belly laugh.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/19/2013 6:25:00 AM

Jon, thank you for commenting and finding a smile. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/9/2013 7:15:00 AM

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! Karen....I'll keep that in mind! How cute and funny! HUGS!!!!!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/9/2013 8:14:00 AM

Eileen, thank you ... hugs back to you :)

Milton Toran

Date: 8/3/2013 5:54:00 PM

Hee Hee! Got a kick out of this one! Or shall I say a "sting?" LOL!! Cleverly written!...Milt

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/9/2013 8:13:00 AM

Milt, thankyou for getting a laugh from my silly rhyme :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/1/2013 3:02:00 PM

Better to be stung than to be hung without fun - I absolutely adore bumble bees karen, hence this clever write is a tastey joy for me, and the moral is appealing as well - J.A.B. %

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/1/2013 3:27:00 PM

Justin, thank you for apprciatin my stab a limericks

Don Johnson

Date: 8/1/2013 12:15:00 AM

and ya no ya alive....love it babe

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/1/2013 6:37:00 AM

Don, ha ha and thank you :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/29/2013 6:06:00 PM

I think I will pass on that kind of dancing *lol* Thanks for a bit of afternoon humor.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/29/2013 6:14:00 PM

ha ha...try it you might like it ? Have a great afternoon:)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/29/2013 3:23:00 PM

This is good and funny. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Lucilla

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/29/2013 4:44:00 PM

Lucilla thankyou very much :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/29/2013 1:29:00 PM

This is so very cute ;}

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/29/2013 2:52:00 PM

Thank you Debbie, much appreciated... :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 7/28/2013 10:48:00 PM

Ouch!!! Thanks for a belly laugh this morning. Good luck in the contest, Karen. Licia :-)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/29/2013 10:27:00 AM

Thank you very much :) Have a great day

Heather Secrest

Date: 7/28/2013 3:52:00 PM

Funny!!! If i ever jive, it will not be in a beehive...Thanks for those words of wisdom!! -heather

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/29/2013 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Heather ...much appreciated

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/28/2013 1:42:00 PM

Who cannot smile upon reading this gem?? So cute !!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/28/2013 3:28:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating...:)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/27/2013 11:53:00 PM

This is a fantastic limerick my dear friend, Karen. I love it and so enjoyed. It put smiles on my face. Thank you so much for sharing & your inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/28/2013 9:43:00 AM

Leonora, thank you for your lovely comments and for enjoying my silly little poem ...hugs to you :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/27/2013 11:13:00 PM

Contesr? Sounds real.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 7/28/2013 9:42:00 AM

John, thank you ha ha :)