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Below is the poem entitled ITTY BITTY HOPE which was written by poet Lyric Man. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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awe of gentle breeze

fragrant shadow of delight

moonlit hope aglow..

catch the air of her appeal

as she fades into the night  

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest Name: Third & Final Itty Bitty Contest 
Form: Tanka

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  1. Date: 4/20/2014 5:09:00 AM
    A glimpse of beauty...beheld and lost, alas too quiclyk; beautiful write shrouded in romanticism. // congrats on a merited win Dave.

  1. Date: 4/20/2014 12:55:00 AM
    Summary: The guy steps on this balcony and looks over the Courtyard. A perfect night with a gentle breeze brushing her fragrance, like a mist, across his helpless heart. On a wood carved bench not fifty feet from him sits an incredibly attractive lady. The light is such that he mostly gets a silhouette. Moon beans finally reveal that she is indeed, perfection. He's instantly off to the Courtyard to meet her. But she has now slipped into the wood, lost in the night

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 10:23:00 PM
    Nice... leaves an ambiance of... something, can't quite say what... but leaves a definite lasting impression. Great job

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:01:00 PM
    A beautiful dance of words. Congratulations, SuZ

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 11:38:00 AM
    LovE how you feature something's that somehow symbolizes hope and u also tell that sometimes hope fades..:), olive eloisa :) CONGRATULATIONS

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:39:00 AM
    Awesome is the word here,,,,emotional write Dave ,,, great win,,, Congrats !

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:07:00 AM
    This poem is a beautiful waltz and I am day dreaming while dancing! I love it Dave! Congratulations on your wonderful win with this beauty!

  1. Date: 4/18/2014 11:48:00 PM
    Nice win Dave... Congratulations... Verlena

  1. Date: 4/18/2014 11:38:00 PM
    Congratulations in my contest,Dave. The title alone is cute and inspiring and the words are so nice!!

  1. Date: 4/10/2014 12:03:00 AM
    Too hard to catch

  1. Date: 4/1/2014 12:54:00 PM
    Ah that momentary breeze - an instant to remember. Like it. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/1/2014 7:24:00 AM
    This is pretty Dave.

  1. Date: 4/1/2014 7:07:00 AM
    Beautiful, simply a beautiful write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this wondrous poem here! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/1/2014 12:54:00 AM
    Very beautiful and romantic!!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2014 11:26:00 PM
    :-) Sweet and romantic ....great job