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It's Winter

Frozen lake-water, Damp eyelids,misty breath, Foggy-streets' dim lights, Silvery-green valleys, Leafless trees,concrete boughs.
written on: 7-11-2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/17/2014 9:57:00 AM
Too good you must be a pro !
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 5/17/2014 10:49:00 PM
thanks for stopping by. good day!
Date: 11/26/2013 7:34:00 AM
Wonderful. love the mixture of nature and man made.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/26/2013 7:42:00 AM
thanks for the kind comment.
Date: 11/8/2013 7:46:00 AM
Phantasmagoric painting of winter's mornings!
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/8/2013 9:09:00 AM
thank you.
Date: 11/7/2013 5:59:00 PM
Even though this seemed short it was well thought out and well written thank you for sharing a beautiful thought of your imagination with me tonight. and thank you for your congrades fellow souper.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/8/2013 9:07:00 AM
thank you and you are welcome!
Date: 11/7/2013 4:32:00 PM
You quite depicted a winter scene . the concrete boughs was an awesome image.
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/8/2013 9:09:00 AM
Love. hugs and thanks!
Date: 11/7/2013 5:31:00 AM
:) :)
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Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/8/2013 9:08:00 AM
:-):-)

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