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It's Feeble So Falls

a heavy structure constructed on very weak plinth it's feeble so falls

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/17/2016 8:35:00 PM

Hi BL, what you write, so true, sadder still if it is a large building on a weak foundation, that is actually what i pictured while reading. The words say it all BL. A seven for this Senryu my friend. Have a good day....Vlad.

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/18/2016 10:40:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/21/2016 2:57:00 AM

bL, Deep and intriguing but I remember a story that i can connect with this!~Olive ELoisa

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/22/2016 2:40:00 PM

Thank you my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/16/2016 2:53:00 PM

- Lovely my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/16/2016 3:10:00 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2016 6:34:00 PM

yes, so the wall falls!! It is like the scripture about building a house on sand!

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/16/2016 12:34:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/15/2016 10:52:00 AM

Thought provoking, my friend, BL!

Bl Devnath
Date: 1/16/2016 12:36:00 AM

It's a philosophy that covers many fields of life, yes my lovely friend. Loved always,bl