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It Happened On a Rainy Night

Although the rain then turned to hail, they kissed until the moon was pale; and he was found by morning's light, alone, all drained of blood and white.

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Date: 9/10/2023 3:22:00 AM
This verse is so well written Jack with great impact especially that dark twist to conclude. Loved it! Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/10/2023 1:27:00 AM
A man's downfall orchestrated by a femme fatal in disguise. I'll watch out for her :) Congrats on yet another win, my friend! // paul
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Date: 9/9/2023 7:41:00 PM
Yikes! A bit darker view of poetic love. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/8/2023 5:26:00 PM
Dear Jack, back with congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. I adore the dark turn of this romance. It's a pleasure to share to podium with you my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/8/2023 1:27:00 PM
Jack, Edgar Allen eat y'er heart out....
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Date: 9/4/2023 7:50:00 PM
Dear Jack, a poetic plot twist for sure! I adore the rhythm and rhymes of your imaginative gem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/4/2023 9:11:00 AM
A great line in a chapter of a book.
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Date: 9/4/2023 6:50:00 AM
Leave it to you to bring in the vampires or Dracula. LOL..Thanks for sharing. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/4/2023 5:11:00 AM
Some gals ya just don't mess with jack
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