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Irony

All his life great wealth amassed To live in opulence wished Money for ten lives he had Hardly he lived one (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 25 June 2016 Dodoitsu 7-7-7-5 Following the instructions of my friend, Silent One, in his poem: Part 2-FULLY BOOKED My first attempt.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2016 9:57:00 AM

wow, I LOVE this.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/25/2016 11:46:00 AM

I love your new avatar! Thank you for your lovely comment dear, Andrea!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2016 9:16:00 AM

I have known people whom this describes vividly. Regardless of their wealth, I would not wish to trade places.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/25/2016 11:47:00 AM

Who would like to do it if he were a person like you, Richard? Thank you my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/25/2016 8:04:00 AM

- .... pity .....he was not a cat :))) - Great wisdom in this fabulous poem, my friend :) - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/25/2016 11:49:00 AM

Haha!...thank you so much for your precious visit and comment dear Anne-Lise! Hugs!