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Invisible Wind

Invisible wind; he’s on his way to nowhere; he travels the world.

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Matthew Anish

Date: 12/22/2014 2:46:00 PM

Nice personification here and you stuck to the 5 7 5. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/22/2014 3:12:00 PM

I try...peace and blessings, to you too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/22/2014 2:07:00 PM

- A great Haiku, M.L. - I wish you and your family a beautiful and peaceful Christmas - Enjoy and relax with all you love - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/22/2014 3:13:00 PM

Thanks so much; same to you and yours.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 12/20/2014 2:38:00 PM

Very nice. Brain storming. Best wishes to you.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/22/2014 12:50:00 PM

I appreciate the visit and comments.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/19/2014 4:38:00 PM

Hi M.L. - a lot said in those few words...I really liked your Haiku. Sandra

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/22/2014 12:50:00 PM

Thanks Saundra.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/19/2014 2:55:00 PM

wow, enjoyed the surprise in the end, M.L.. thanks for stopping my page.. huggs

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/22/2014 12:49:00 PM

You're welcome; I enjoy reading your work, too. Thanks for stopping by.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/19/2014 8:14:00 AM

I love your haiku M.L !!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/22/2014 12:49:00 PM

I'm glad. Thanks for stopping by.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/19/2014 5:33:00 AM

Impressive, my friend, M.L. Kiser! Welcome!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/19/2014 6:36:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/19/2014 3:45:00 AM

Great personification of wind.Loved it ML. God bless you. --rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2014 10:33:00 PM

this is really nice. Was it for Shadow's contest?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/19/2014 6:31:00 AM

Thank you, no.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/18/2014 8:02:00 PM

M.L. Love the story between these lines of yours The verses of lines leaves me sweet images of the mystical winds that brush against the earth itself, a true joy to read, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem about my mystic dove thanks and yes she is a wonderful lady I agree with you, take care and happy hoildays, cheri

M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/19/2014 6:32:00 AM

Thank you and Happy Holiday's to you and yours.

Joseph May

Date: 12/18/2014 5:41:00 PM

Very nice haiku ....best wishes

Cona Adams

Date: 12/18/2014 5:35:00 PM

I love the wind also, M. L. I also enjoy personification in poetry. Very well done. Leaves the imagination free to travel the world too. Write on!

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/18/2014 5:01:00 PM

ML, I like your Haiku write here on "Invisible Wind" very much. Looks like he's in the middle of continuous travel spectrum. Enjoyed This One!! A "7" too!! Best!! Gary