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Invisible Fingers

I close my eyes and feel the cool wind against my skin.
I capture the scent of nature, the sign that rain is to begin.

The clouds darken before my eyes.
A comfort, a peace I allow in, as I sigh.

I start to feel a tingling sensation pulsing through me.
Like invisible fingers massaging my cares and worries away so I can be free.

These invisible fingers appear to guide my thoughts.
Thoughts of past and present and how to be a better me based on what I was taught. 

I feel the first drop of rain against my face. 
I feel the drop flow to my lips as I taste.

My heart quickens as the rain pours.
I feel the invisible fingers merge with mine as my blood pumps from the core.

I tilt back as the rain flows over my head.
My mind in a state of peace, nothing more to be said. 

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  1. Date: 4/15/2014 2:59:00 PM
    May you remain in that state of peace all the days of y our life, all your poems are refreshing to read, have a great day xxx

    Boy Avatar Nature Boy
    Date: 4/15/2014 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much. I use writing to get me through my hectic days. It takes roughly 15 mins to write them so when others take a smoke break I take a poem break :)
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 2:18:00 PM
    - What a wonderful poem Gregory - love it from the top to the bottom :) - Have a great weekend, enjoy the nature. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 2:16:00 PM
    I really, really enjoyed this poem, Gregory. This was a refreshing way to restart my day! I liked how you incorporated my line throughout your poem, including the title! Fantastic work! :)

    Boy Avatar Nature Boy
    Date: 11/9/2013 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mmm I'm glad you saw the refreshing message I aimed for.