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Intricacy of Light

My inner voice calm, looks for compassion. To give encouragement, it comes from within. I look for honesty as my eyes turn inside-out. Always searching to bend nettles and thorns into a perspicacious light, intricacy of lace — intimate in the meaning of life and love. Gems, like an embryo, form in the dark — eye-popping wisdom of diamonds and rubies, sapphires and fiery opals, not endlessly hypnotic but romantically impactful, not dubiously distracting. My arms don’t begin at the shoulders but are in the pits of my inner ken, an amiable passion, like a Winter’s fire surging powerfully to my hands that draw the waters of kisses and hugs and the mundane of cleanup at the end of a day, restart over and over again — deep deep breaths whisper slowly of strength and vigor, though the knees ache, the back’s bent but the smiles spark and the laughs light up like fuel from within. My family draws from my spirituality, the sense that everything will be alright. 4/23/2020 Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger A Poem Honoring Spirituality Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/9/2020 12:33:00 AM
Superb imagery, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 5/7/2020 4:11:00 PM
Such a powerful and skillful explanation of the complexities of that which guides the spiritual life. Thank you for being so open and sharing. This is wonderful poetry.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 5/7/2020 12:32:00 PM
Congrats Kim on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, L.J.!
Date: 5/7/2020 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts of spirituality, Kim. Light, encouragement, service, confidence, honesty. Well done, congrats on your #1 placement ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 5/7/2020 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations Kim! So glad you placed first. So well done! Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2020 9:51:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 4/26/2020 9:48:00 PM
"though the knees ache, the back’s bent but the smiles spark and the laughs light up like fuel from within." Wow, you have perfectly conveyed a faith that is steadfast amidst everything. A wonderful expression of faith. Best luck.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2020 4:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, JCB!
Date: 4/25/2020 7:37:00 AM
Oh so well written, Bless you. Julie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2020 9:59:00 PM
Thank you, Julie! Blessings!
Date: 4/24/2020 3:13:00 PM
Beautifully expressed Kim. Your faith keeps you strong and feeds your spiritual growth. We feed our faith by reading The Word. Great job. Good luck in the conteswt and stay well. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2020 4:23:00 PM
Yes we do! Thanks, Judy!
Date: 4/24/2020 11:47:00 AM
I like the second stanza, Kim, good luck in Caren's contest. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2020 4:24:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Date: 4/24/2020 6:42:00 AM
The spiritual world hidden within is the only way to heaven. Impressive spiritual writing that shows there is a invaluable treasure resinding into your heart dearest, Kim. Good luck. Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2020 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 4/24/2020 5:17:00 AM
Your poem shows Spirituality. It is beautiful. Thankful for the reminder that God does for me what I can't do for myself. I pray before I do anything. God helps me to show the person who needs this light it in their way. Great job.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2020 7:28:00 AM
We serve a good God!
Date: 4/23/2020 9:29:00 PM
This is so wonderful - I love it and am faving it. Best in the contest and many prayers for your continued inspiration and faith. Thank you for your beautiful treasure. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thank you, Regina! <3 Kim
Date: 4/23/2020 3:15:00 PM
Sooo lovely Kim. I especially love the stanza with the gem references. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2020 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam!
Date: 4/23/2020 8:46:00 AM
This is exceptional and is worthy of multiple reads. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Richard!

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