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rushed into action ringing in our ears— Oh dear! reactionary reapplication of clothes our rearing of kids over? 10/15/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/18/2021 11:00:00 AM

Our phone rings so rarely, we forget what the sound is. Our children all text now. So this made sense for me

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/16/2021 7:05:00 AM

Thoughtful, well done, Kim. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/16/2021 11:42:00 AM

Thank you, Janice!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2021 6:32:00 AM

Sometimes they need to be reared again because of the mistakes they are making. For some they don't see where they are making mistakes until their life is nearly over. I enjoyed reading this one. Reads like a good contender to me if it is for a contest. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest and for the nice comment on my work. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2021 2:04:00 PM

Lovely writing... such honest thoughts. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2021 7:40:00 PM

Thanks, Gina! Supposed to be funny ;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2021 11:58:00 AM

At least the coming generations shouldn't have tinnitus --- no phones, no doorbells, and fewer rock concerts. lol. Happy Weekend, Kim. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2021 12:13:00 PM

How funny! You could be right..lol!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/15/2021 11:31:00 AM

Enjoyed your Tanka Kim. Made me smile to think how much the phone did ring when the kids were home now everything is text and kids do not pick up the phone. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2021 12:17:00 PM

The world sure has changed! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2021 5:53:00 AM

give it thought it deserves.