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Inside My Aqua Dream

Inside my aqua dream, a man, bright-eyed, stood beckoning to me in ocean’s tide. I saw him from the shoreline of a bay. His eyes, reflecting blue of water’s spray, were tinged with green, and I was mystified. A wave came crashing, and it multiplied. The man’s eyes shone like sea in sun of day, and then I knew. . .on land I could not stay inside my aqua dream. The mesmerizing stranger spoke; I spied a dolphin that appeared and gave a ride to both of us. We clung to silver-gray, and jumping on the ocean waves, away we traveled. How I longed to ever glide inside my aqua dream! Written 7/29/12 for Francine Roberts' "On the Ocean Waves" Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/24/2013 4:21:00 PM
I love this Andrea, my kind of write. " Awesome " must be my cancer rising and cancer moon water signs ;} going to fav's ;} Winner ;} cool! glad you liked God's grace" yes, I like that line too. the heaven's opened up. I just posted " The Great Swan " which I wrote today 1pm, This is the 8th one from the tablet ;} xo's ;}
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Date: 4/24/2013 8:00:00 AM
Is you a dreamer Petal lol, I am lol. Thanks for calling by. I have become busy with work so I'm not getting the time for the soup. The dark eyes were a ref; to your avatar lol, nice to know we share the same colour eyes, green is my fave colour. Take care, Richard
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Date: 8/9/2012 6:09:00 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2012 8:28:00 AM
powerful imagination at work here, I love this
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
A wonderful dream you became a mermaid with this handsome young man. ha ha sleep on sweetie and dream away. love phyl
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Date: 8/5/2012 10:51:00 AM
Wow, a fabulous dream...don't wake me up!! Congrats on your amazing win, Andrea! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 12:15:00 PM
what a beautiful imaginative piece, my friend - a big winner for sure
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Date: 8/3/2012 7:44:00 PM
You have made this dream my own, ...., a poem becoming a sea-faring legend...as if passed down from several generations. Love it!
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Date: 8/3/2012 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win. A spectacular write. Love you azua dream! :) Tanya
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations once again Andy xx
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Date: 8/3/2012 7:39:00 AM
a lovely dream it is ...congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/2/2012 10:10:00 AM
Excellent poem of aqua dream bears to the life. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/1/2012 4:51:00 PM
oh my independence day was a wish to be free from my back pain so I can be more active and less crabby.
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Date: 8/1/2012 4:50:00 PM
very nice....we just came back from Tampa Bay and the beaches there are nice but it has been raining there for a few weeks and flooding...I did find a few shells and got to see some dolphins.
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Date: 8/1/2012 2:51:00 PM
A right rolling ride of a write here Andrea..) good to read today"
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Date: 7/31/2012 10:47:00 AM
Was the stranger Namot of Atlantis? Seriously, this is a thought provking poem! Dolphin power! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/31/2012 7:35:00 AM
Andrea just back for a second helping, you do have these men waiting for you, on the beach, at your gate, this is great though...David
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Date: 7/31/2012 5:35:00 AM
How beautiful a tale you have told here, awesome description, I can imagine being the girl on the dolphin, well done
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Date: 7/31/2012 12:08:00 AM
Excellent. Well imagery write. Well done. tfs
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Date: 7/30/2012 6:34:00 PM
Sacrafice can give so much if we only believe - geat story flow Andrea -
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Date: 7/30/2012 12:48:00 PM
WAY TO GO, ANDREA in the International Contest. First place. Fifty bucks? Should have been five hundred. You be the greatest. Love, daver And, thanks for the ride inside your aqua dream.
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Date: 7/30/2012 9:29:00 AM
She gladly drowned when she heard the sound of the ocean calling her. His gentle charm could bring no harm when her heart he would coyly stir. She ran and jumped into his arms that swallowed her up whole. And now the two would join together eternally one soul.
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Date: 7/30/2012 7:52:00 AM
Just wonderful Andrea!Beautiful imagery in this poem.Love it!
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Date: 7/30/2012 6:59:00 AM
Wow, what an enchanting dream! Beautiful and romantic!! I enjoyed reading this morning. This one could work for Kim's contest, too. So dreamy...
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Date: 7/30/2012 3:47:00 AM
wheyy, i see a beautiful mermaid here, andie... languid in sytle and form giving me a bit of a gentle nudge toward that unique dreamland that lives inside your head... yes!..:) huggs!
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