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Like melted chocolate, words dripping from his velvety tongue rippled to her heart; she tasted their rich flavor, inhaled the aroma, succumbing to emotional intoxication. She craved for more... Seduced by luxuriant words, her defenses weakened, overpowered by an irresistible urge to bathe in love’s indulgence. Opulent pleasures caressed her thoughts. Each syllable drew a sigh. Her wish: to be sated His unspoken promise: to fill her with abandon – to thrill her. She no longer dared inhibit the demands her soul was making; this was hers for the taking. Warning signs: DENIED! She tasted the sweetness gratifying her cravings in his indulgent love. ----------------------------------- A Collaboration between Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian

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Maria Williams

Date: 7/16/2017 3:10:00 AM

Ah! I finally found it - there was no hyperlink. Glad I did and thank you for pointing it out Mr Romantic, Smooth Chocolate word Poet. So glad she ignored the warning sign refusing to inhibit her primal instinct and tasted of the loves opulence so she could be satiated. And Why Not! Very sensual, subtle and at the same time a descriptive poem Paul and Eileen...Maria xox

Paul Callus
Date: 7/16/2017 7:57:00 AM

I hope you did not have to go to too much trouble to find it, Maria:) This 'romantic chocolate poet' has his preferences...dark chocolate! Thank you for the lovely pleasant feedback; I hope Eileen will get to read it, too. Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay

Date: 7/14/2016 9:46:00 AM

Pleasure in abundance, i love the comparison to indulgence of love and chocolate, very enjoyable!! Well done, a 7 from me ;-)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/14/2016 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Laura. You can indulge in dark chocolate without worrying about cholesterol:) Glad you enjoyed, and the high rating is appreciated. ~ Warm Regards // paul

John Hamilton

Date: 5/24/2016 6:07:00 AM

Love and chocolate what could be better! What a great collab from you two, you both have a distinctive flavour to add to this delicious piece. Congrats and a 7.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 8:36:00 AM

Many thanks from both Eileen and myself, John; this feedback is truly appreciated. Regards // paul

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/19/2016 4:39:00 AM

very evocative. great collaboration.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2016 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Mohan. Eileen and I mix our ink with much pleasure. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/14/2016 9:48:00 AM

I AM SO GLAD TO HAVE FOUND THIS GREAT POEM THIS MORN. Team effort birthed this gem! Congrats to you both on creating such a positive and enjoyable write.A7

Paul Callus
Date: 5/14/2016 11:01:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, my friend! Pleased that our combined effort contributed to your satisfaction! ~ All the best....paul

Red Fiery

Date: 5/13/2016 1:22:00 AM

congratulation to my fav poets here..both of you have taken my heart by this write...this is such a delightful write...i am faving it nowwwww.....A 100/100 Hugs to u both

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 12:09:00 PM

I hope Eileen will stop by to read these delightful comments, Red:) The fav and high marks are truly heartening! Regards & Hugs to you, too:) ~ paul

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/12/2016 8:55:00 AM

Mr Paul, Very brilliant start & nice ending. Enjoyed ur poem. A 7..............//:) hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 5/12/2016 11:45:00 AM

That's kind of you Manmath; both lovely comments and high rating are appreciated:) ~ Thank you. // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/9/2016 8:50:00 PM

G'day Paul and Eileen ... your collaboration has worked really well. Chocolate and love; sounds good - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 5/12/2016 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for commenting positively on our poem, Lindsay! Always pleased to have you stopping by. ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2016 4:54:00 PM

Paul, this reminds me of what happened to the girl in the BEGINNINg of my sonnet I wrote last week. whose indulgence led to pregnancy!! But you make this a very luscious write indeed~

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2016 5:08:00 PM

Initially, in my mind I was thinking of eventual betrayal; Eileen chose a different path; that's the beauty of co-writes! // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/8/2016 4:22:00 PM

Writing with you is a sweet treat, Paul. Enjoyed reading all the comments. Hugs

Red Fiery
Date: 5/13/2016 1:23:00 AM

this is such a gr8 collaboration ...congratulations to u and paul,,,Hugs red

Paul Callus
Date: 5/9/2016 5:05:00 PM

The pleasure is mine, Eileen:) I enjoy writing with you, too; it's as if we read each other's mind! By the way, I dig this avatar...it speaks to me:) hugs // paul

Angie Thomas

Date: 5/5/2016 6:58:00 AM

This gave me goosebumps, and scared me at the same time... Such a beautiful, intoxicating description of addictive love... mesmerizing and heartbreaking. Great job! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2016 3:48:00 PM

What a coincidence.....just as I come back from reading about your 'addictive love'!! Thank you for the 'instinctive' reaction to this poem, Angie, and for finding it to your liking! ~ Best regards // paul [ps...pict was chosen by Eileen.]

Angie Thomas
Date: 5/5/2016 6:59:00 AM

And the picture is also so captivating...

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/4/2016 5:59:00 AM

Excellent collaboration beautifully melted into a sensuous poem and thank you for your kind words on my Poem dated 29th April Sneh best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor

Paul Callus
Date: 5/6/2016 3:51:00 PM

Thank you, Ravindra. Your lovely comments are appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/4/2016 2:37:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful collaboration. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/4/2016 4:26:00 AM

Thank you, Ravi. Your support and encouragement are truly appreciated. Regards .... paul

Probir Gupta

Date: 5/3/2016 11:04:00 AM

Beautiful sensuality ... Have been reading over and over....

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2016 12:54:00 PM

I appreciate the fact that you read it more than once, and thank you for the lovely comment, Probir. ~ All the best. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/3/2016 3:32:00 AM

A magical melding of two talented romantics. This is beautiful Eileen and Paul! #7 ; )

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2016 12:35:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely complimentary comments and the 7, Connie! Your judgment is something I rely on:) ~ Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/2/2016 11:24:00 PM

Beautiful collaboration you two...enjoyed

Paul Callus
Date: 5/3/2016 2:43:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. Pleased that you enjoyed. ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 5/2/2016 3:56:00 PM

Paul and Eileen, you both did wonderful writing this beautiful poem, a sweet 7 ~

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2016 4:18:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Constance; thank you for reading and the high rating. ~ Regards // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/2/2016 2:40:00 PM

Excellent collaboration my lovely friend. A great 7. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2016 3:16:00 PM

A big thank you from me and Eileen, BL. Your continuous support is very much appreciated. ~ All the best....paul

Edlynn Nau

Date: 5/2/2016 2:34:00 PM

That unusual and not easily found event where both hearts get what they want. Love the sensuality, that words speak to women (as they do), and what quicksand love certainly is! Love this...yes a 7.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2016 3:14:00 PM

It is not only women who are conditioned by words, Edlynn:) I too have succumbed to your lovely feedback! Thank you for loving our combined effort, and for the high rating. Eileen will love your comments, too! ~ Regards // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/2/2016 2:01:00 PM

What a sensuous and seductive poem! Irresistible it appears to every lady's heart dear, Paul! A seven!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2016 2:50:00 PM

Thank you, Demi! Some people have the gift of words....reaching deep to a woman's heart! How can she resist!! ~ All the best, my friend. // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/1/2016 9:55:00 PM

Loved this, I have to confess I read the first line as "like Malta chocolate" :) Great Collab!!!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2016 3:50:00 AM

I have another confession to make, Arthur....we do not manufacture our own chocolate over here, it's all imported, but we do try to choose the best:) Thank you for clicking on the 'like'! ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane

Date: 5/1/2016 6:10:00 PM

Each line is a seduction. It was a pleasure to read these passionate verses in your tastefully written piece, Paul and Eileen.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2016 3:45:00 AM

I am pleased, Lin, that you wrote 'tastefully'; it means that we stayed within dignified boundaries! Thank you for reading and enjoying. ~ Regards // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/1/2016 2:06:00 PM

A great combination from two poets who know how to evoke sensual and sensational feelings with their writings, well done :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2016 2:42:00 PM

Thank you Casarah. With Eileen's added inspiration sensuality has no chance of going missing:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/1/2016 1:22:00 PM

I could easily get in the gutter after reading such heat and then seeing: Collaboration between ... . I don't know if you follow, but I've had my grin. Heat it is and I hope everyone has experienced what y'all did such a great job delivering in the fine, sensual poem that has truly woken my sensual memories ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2016 2:39:00 PM

I love your comments, CayCay...I find them irresistible:) Thank you for a most pleasant visit. Glad that you have revisited lovely memories. ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 5/1/2016 12:24:00 PM

Wow Paul! what a great collab for you and Eileen! well done thanks for sharing~! :)-luloo

Paul Callus
Date: 5/1/2016 2:28:00 PM

Thank you Laura! I am sure Eileen will be pleased to read your nice comments:) ~ Warm regards // paul