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In Through the Out Door

Walking the soft sands of yesteryear only the good times come to mind stardust and moonbeams filter between the redemption that I find bright light hangs out in the distance hints of tomorrow's sunset never found seashells echo a hopeful message carry along bits of you in every sound a young ballerina twirls in solo dance watched so closely but still so far away reach I reach out of my darkness for a ring to shine for just one more day heading in through the out door barely keeping my head above ground shaking off the unholy water this time I'm sticking around

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/15/2016 11:05:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Tim, those fond memories are so special :-) love the last stanza Hugs
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Date: 12/7/2016 2:15:00 PM
Filled with echoes of memories and painting such splendor.. Yesteryear, gone but not forgotten for it holds sweet treasures! Perfect 7 and added to my fav list positive and uplifting poem.
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Date: 12/5/2016 12:29:00 AM
Oh so lovely and beautifully poetic. Awesome rhyming and I love the mention of seashells. The word choice is great too, esp like moonbeams, yesteryear, ballerina, . Kudos. Nice to read from your pen again
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:18:00 PM
A stunning write as always my dear friend, Tim. Perfect 7. Have a great new week! love and hugs, Galeo
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Date: 12/4/2016 2:59:00 PM
The hurt of longing for a lost love? A wedding ring? So eloquent, as always Tim.
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Date: 12/4/2016 11:35:00 AM
again, you enchant, tim.... well done.. huggs
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Date: 12/4/2016 7:40:00 AM
last two lines are my fave. As always...amazing! cheeries ~ john
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Date: 12/3/2016 10:31:00 PM
beautiful, although that last verse sounds a lot like me coming back to the bar for last call! :)
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Date: 12/3/2016 5:21:00 PM
Beautiful Tim. Our happiness depends a great deal on what we choose to hang onto. We must remember the good times and try to forget the bad ones. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/3/2016 4:21:00 PM
That's so beautiful, Tim... and really touching... :*
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Date: 12/3/2016 9:50:00 AM
Tim, the title drew me to read this. Very well written and with a theme many can relate to.
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Date: 12/2/2016 9:42:00 PM
this is deep and very lovely, Tim. I quite like this charming poem!
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:02:00 PM
Such a lovely poem. I especially love the title. Same as the Led Zepplin's song.
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Date: 12/2/2016 2:57:00 PM
The echo of good times in seashells, keep your head above ground, keep your head above water. Stick around...
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Date: 12/2/2016 2:45:00 PM
Whoever the subject of your poem is, the poem is brilliantly written, dear friend, Tim!
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Date: 12/2/2016 1:31:00 PM
I really wish the poet to go there...and stick around ...That ring might shine again..Never too late .I do believe in Happily ever after...and I wish it to every good ftriend.Am touched by this beauty Tim.
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Date: 12/2/2016 12:54:00 PM
They opening two lines say it all to me. Very nicely done Tim. This one creates some thought, that's for sure.
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Date: 12/2/2016 12:46:00 PM
Sounds like you might be talking about your daughter:) Just a guess of course.
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