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In the Same Evening the Shadow Reveals

The second Shadow reveals The spotlight reveals In the brightness a shadow is seen On a wooden chair Is wooden arms and legs The back rest cushion A turquoise color Head and the sear On the seat are Two bunnies ornaments When the spotlight shines The shadow appears A man and a woman they stare at each other Coming closer slowly When they are closer They embrace into a Passionate kiss this is the second shadows seen

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/21/2023 7:30:00 AM

Good Morning Darlene. Hi. I love your title to which you did not stray. I found this clever. You gave much thought to the moment and scene. Very creative. Without saying, your ending line is priceless. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful week. Peace and Blessings. (smile)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/21/2023 4:12:00 PM

Hello Lisa, good evening Lisa. oh , thank you for the lovely comment. Thank you Lisa i did have a nice day. I wish you a wonderful week. Peace & blessings ]smile[/Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/16/2023 3:29:00 PM

My beloved friend, Darlene this is a nice poem. "they embrace to a passionate kiss" revealed by a shadow. Oh God. You touched something deep inside. Loved this. My love María

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/17/2023 10:45:00 AM

Hello Maria, Thank you Maria. Thank you for the lovely comment. Love Darlene

Charles Messina

Date: 10/16/2023 4:14:00 AM

Hello Darlene...great imagery and a perfect ending! Have a nice day :) Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2023 12:03:00 PM

Hello Charles, thankyou for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 10/15/2023 8:58:00 PM

Hello Darlene,a nice poem! Have a blessed week!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2023 12:04:00 PM

Hello Mulu, Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/15/2023 1:05:00 PM

Are not we all shadows, obstructing light in one way or another!? Light wiser to purify, our grace often the shadows. Love it. Well done.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2023 12:08:00 PM

Hello Joe, We all have shadows. Objects have shadows to. Yet I like what you said about the shadows. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/13/2023 4:37:00 AM

Darlene, such lovely images are created by your poetic shadows! I can just see this happening on my wall and it brings a smile!! A happy weekend to you xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/13/2023 11:11:00 AM

Hello Mike, When i see these shadows I watch them and when they embrace I pretend it is me. I see these shadows every night. It brings me a good feeling inside. Thank you. Happy weekend to you to Mike. xxxxxxx/Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2023 3:23:00 PM

Love that final verse, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/12/2023 3:27:00 PM

Hello Kim, Thank you. i also like the last verse. Hugs. /Darlene/

Karen Croft

Date: 10/11/2023 12:27:00 PM

Very interesting how all of it comes together. Enjoyed! Have a great day also

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/11/2023 3:08:00 PM

Hello Karen, Thank you Karen. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/10/2023 1:04:00 PM

This is a great poem, Darlene! Beginning with the unique title, you have created such a beautiful picture with a shadow, spotlight, and an embrace! So poetic - I really love it!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2023 3:18:00 PM

Hello Mala, Hi! So good to see you Mala. How are you? thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my frind. Love & Friendship /Darlene\

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/7/2023 8:59:00 AM

A wonderful poem Darlene. With two shadows, your poet's heart has conjured up a beautiful scene. Well done my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2023 5:52:00 AM

Hello Jerry , Thank you Jerry. Did you have a nice thanksgiving Day? My thanksgiving Day was on Saturday. I had my niece and her husband for 3 days. Enjoy your day my friend. thank you for the lovely comment. ./Darlene/

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/6/2023 11:30:00 AM

Well done and written Darlene. Shadows of two lovers kissing. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2023 11:37:00 AM

Hello Phyllis, Yes these shadow lovers do this every night. With a passionate kiss. So romantic. Lovers kissing. Love, Darlene/

Bill Baker

Date: 10/5/2023 4:53:00 PM

Intriguing and well written poetry, Darlene. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us my friend. Hugs, Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2023 11:16:00 AM

Hello Bill, Hi! Your welcome my poet friend. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/4/2023 1:33:00 PM

Darlene, your ability to capture moments is truly awe-inspiring. Your imagery is like windows into a world of stunning beauty,

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2023 11:21:00 AM

Hello Sotto, Thank you Sotto. My imagination see a lot of things in shadows. Like the other poem i created, The Shadow Reaveals .Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\/

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/4/2023 8:41:00 AM

Without light we are all shadow -- shadow is object and not merely the casting. And yet, there is an innate relationship...whether sun, moon or stars, or the vast darkness between, somehow, some why, we sense divine illuminating presence. Lovely write, my friend. Profoundly beautiful!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2023 10:48:00 AM

Hello Joe, Thank you Joe. This shadow tells a story if two peop9le in love. Thank you for a lovely comment. Enjoyyour day my friend. /Darlene\

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/3/2023 10:24:00 AM

Very thought provoking, Darlene, as shadows are born from light that can't penetrate solid objects! They seem to have a life of their own - a life you have profoundly captured. Nice work! Blessings!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2023 10:51:00 AM

Hello Sam, Thank you. I see these romantic couple every night. I have no idea where the shadow comes from. Blessings my my friend./Darlene\

Deb M

Date: 10/2/2023 8:05:00 PM

Hi Darlene….it is amazing what shadows are cast from different lighting and objects. Well said and nice poem Darlene. Debx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2023 4:20:00 AM

Hello Deb, yes it is amazing what shadows are cast from from lighting and objects. Enjoy yur day Deb. my friend. /Darlene\x

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2023 1:52:00 PM

Moments beautifully captured, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2023 3:22:00 PM

Hello Vijay, thank you Vjay, Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene/

Tom Woody

Date: 10/2/2023 1:06:00 PM

Hey, I like the romantic ending, for sure

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2023 3:24:00 PM

Hello Tom, I also like the romantic ending. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/