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In the Midst of My Dreams

In the midst of my dreams where happily ever afters and fairy tales come true the scarlet rose moon dips as she dances along side me under a million flickering strobes illuminating our milky way serenade I call out her name and the brightest star shines I watch her gleam I watch her glow basking in all that's good and I know that beauty The same beauty I see in her face as I hear those fragrant whispers showering down on me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/3/2015 5:04:00 PM
Romance written at its best. - "I call out her name and the brightest star shines I watch her gleam I watch her glow basking in all that's good and I know" Sweet, and so smoothly romantic.. A7
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Date: 9/24/2015 10:49:00 AM
Sigh... Can't read your work without a sigh of appreciation... Lovely... as always...
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Date: 9/24/2015 12:17:00 AM
very beautiful, Tim!
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Date: 9/23/2015 9:52:00 PM
Dear Tim What a romantic work, very expressive and passionate, great job, cheri
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Date: 9/23/2015 6:05:00 PM
Your romantic heart my friend, Tim, makes the Milky way blush! Excellent writing!
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Date: 9/23/2015 4:16:00 PM
Extremely Romantic... Very warm and beautiful , a fave.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/25/2015 6:03:00 PM
Your verses say so much : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/24/2015 4:43:00 PM
Im so happy it inspired such a beauty...cuz mine is a simple verse. : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/24/2015 4:42:00 PM
Im humbled : )
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/23/2015 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Charmu. I was inspired to write an echo to your beautiful verse.

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